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Get Well, Brooke!

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Writing for Brooke

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Comment from mumsyone
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This is a beautiful poem for Brooke, and I'm sure she will appreciate every word of it, if and when she is able to read it or have it read to her.

Lois

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    She is an inspiration to us all, and I hope and pray she will be back with us soon. Alexis x
Comment from Walu Feral
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WOW MATE! Where are my sixes when I need the buggers, this is superb Alexis. I don't know if I've seen you write a poem before, but this is brilliant my friend. Brooke will love it. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Brooke is an inspiration to us all, and I hope and pray she will be back with us soon. Alexis xxx
Comment from Annette Gulliver
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A beautiful heartfelt poem in honour of Brooke. I'm sure she would love your rainbow, so like many of Brooke's wonderful childrens poems. The book for Brooke is growing more each day. I hope she gets well soon.

Annette

 Comment Written 30-May-2015

reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Brooke is an inspiration to us all, and I hope and pray she will be back with us soon. Alexis x
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great presentation. The colors are perfect. The large type really draws you in and makes you want to continue reading. Good job and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Brooke is an inspiration to us all, and I hope and pray she will be back with us soon. Alexis x
Comment from Joy Graham
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Oh, sigh. I can't read too many of these messages before I choke up and can't see to read. I need a break after yours. I'll read more later. Your message is beautiful. I feel selfish in wanting her to come back, too.

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Brooke is an inspiration to us all, and I hope and pray she will be back with us soon. Alexis x
Comment from Ulla
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This is lovely. I have no 6 stars left or I would have given you that. Being so new to the site , I don't know about Brooke but I am starting to learn. I sense the sorrow you feel. Ulla

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Brooke is an inspiration to us all, and I hope and pray she will be back with us soon. Alexis x
Comment from scongrove
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Oh wow Alexis! This is really good. :) Is this a contest you entered or is this about someone in particular? You are definitely multi-talented girl. :)
Shana :)

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    I wrote this so Brooke is in no doubt that we would be overjoyed if she was well enough to return to us. Alexis xxx
Comment from bookishfabler
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Oh my. Did your friend move on to greener passages? You are a awesome person. You have great wit and are always a friend. I think your friend is very proud of you. I also know she would love you poem becuse it came from your big heart.
Hugs Heidi

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Thank you so much for your review. I wrote this so Brooke (Adewpearl)is in no doubt that we would be overjoyed if she was well enough to return to us here at Fan Story. Alexis xxx
reply by bookishfabler on 30-May-2015
    Oh, I know Adewpearl. How is she?
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
    Hi Heidi, Brooke (Adewpearl) has been the top ranked poet here on Fan Story for many years. She not only wrote inspirational poetry, but she was a wonderful reviewer as well. Many of us have learnt so much from her over the years, and we hope she will return when she feels well enough. x
reply by bookishfabler on 30-May-2015
    We were each others fans. I hope she gets better and comes back too.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Love your opening stanza, Alexis, especially the fledglings part. So true and it was that connection that is so important to newcomers. I have no idea who will fill that role now.

Your entire poem is on point and states our sentiment just like it is.

Come back to us ... you hear?

Lovely.

Gloria

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    I have no idea either. Let's pray that one day she will return. Alexis x
Comment from rwilliam
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This is well written. It speaks to anyone who has lost a loved one.It's encouraging and makes you think of that person's good qualities.

Good job! :-)

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    I wrote this so Brooke (Adewpearl)is in no doubt that we would be overjoyed if she was well enough to return to us here at Fan Story. Alexis xxx