Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day CJ. Great work mate. Sometimes we have to make the hard decissions for the benifit of the whole tribe, brave and hard, but needed...

A couple of suggestions...

"if someone does not want to accept or love anther's(another's) children no amount"

"almost 28 years of being married that it was Gods will-Do(God's will, do) not ever look under the rug."

"Finally ending(returning) home when my sister came for me."

"This was not my last time on the road again(-again), but in the end finding peace of mind for all of us was(-was...+meant) leaving, when my children were a little older."

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 29-May-2015

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reply by the author on 29-May-2015

I am fixing these right now.

Thank you.

reply by Walu Feral on 29-May-2015

You are doing really well my friend, keep at it. I'm proud of you.

Comment from Jackreese

Excellent

Not trying to poke fun, but I felt like I was reading something about Sister Wives only a little darker. There was so much going on I it left me wanting more. I think you are on to something here, Id definitely keep going.

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 29-May-2015

You are right, and I am struggling with the story.

There is of course a lot more to the story.

There were a lot of kids, and many are scarred, or all have scars, one is missing and one we lost to at his own hand in the last few years. We have experienced drugs and other things we never imagined.

Most have made their lives much better.

Writing is my therapy.

Thank you for your interest.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

As always, you tell an excellent story. You are so genuine and honest sharing your life story that I am humbled by your strength. You are an amazing woman, and it makes me happy to know that you got away from such a dysfunctional family and you live happy and at peace now.

I found a couple of spelling errors, nothing big; and believe me when I say that I make the same mistakes, and I appreciate when other writers point them out to me, as long as is done in a respectful and kind manner. Good job my friend!!!

2nd paragraph, ['shock! This is my fault,........to develop a intimate relationship]= an intimate relationship [accept or love anther's children] =another's children

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you so much.

I learn from people like you, sadly it seems to go in one part of my brain and out the other.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Your story is very compelling, and makes me feel what you are feeling. It has to have been hard to be rejected by your little sister, but so happy that you two made amends in the end. Naturally your way of life is different from most of our experiences, but the way you explain it helps us all to understand a different culture.

Rhonda

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thanks again.

I am trying to show that many of the things put on the media do not tell the things that everyone goes through.
Most men especially do not ever think they will do some of the violent things they find themselves doing.

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 28-May-2015

That is very true. I was badly abused in my first marriage and I don't think he meant to be that way. I think violence became his drug of choice.