Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from rspoet
A beautiful message in the wind, soft whispers on the breeze, there is no surer messenger for loving thoughts like these. Written with soft alliteration, rhymed with a gentle touch, this message will bring a smile to her face and warm her heart.
Your picture is perfect to match the poem, framed in a sky blue background, a poem within a poem
A get well poem she will love
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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A beautiful message in the wind, soft whispers on the breeze, there is no surer messenger for loving thoughts like these. Written with soft alliteration, rhymed with a gentle touch, this message will bring a smile to her face and warm her heart.
Your picture is perfect to match the poem, framed in a sky blue background, a poem within a poem
A get well poem she will love
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you so much. Your comments are o informative. I appreciate all. Jan
Comment from judiverse
This is lovely, and Brooke will be proud of you. We hope she'll hurry back. She always had an upbeat thought to her poems. I didn't take any of her classes, but she must have been a wonderful teacher. Excellent rhyme in this, and great expression of thought. I like the wishes being carried on the breeze. judi
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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This is lovely, and Brooke will be proud of you. We hope she'll hurry back. She always had an upbeat thought to her poems. I didn't take any of her classes, but she must have been a wonderful teacher. Excellent rhyme in this, and great expression of thought. I like the wishes being carried on the breeze. judi
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your time reading and reviewing my poem.. I have wanted to take her sonnet class, but time and money keep me from that now. I hope she is able to return soon.
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You're welcome. I understand she is a wonderful teacher. I haven't taken a FS course either, but hers would surely be inspirational. Have read several poems from people wanting to pay tribute to Brooke. judi
Comment from Curly Girly
Your message serves as a reminder to all of us that life is fragile, and there are faces and real people behind our FS names. Yes, I too, hope that Brooke recovers soon. Her boots stand empty at the door, and we are waiting for her to come back and fill them.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Your message serves as a reminder to all of us that life is fragile, and there are faces and real people behind our FS names. Yes, I too, hope that Brooke recovers soon. Her boots stand empty at the door, and we are waiting for her to come back and fill them.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you very much. [did you see the link at the bottom on the page where my poem is that you can add one of your own poems?]
I appreciate your time reviewing.
Comment from Ben Colder
I did not know Brooke was sick. I must email her and let ther know we miss her. Thanks for sharing this news in your lovely poem. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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I did not know Brooke was sick. I must email her and let ther know we miss her. Thanks for sharing this news in your lovely poem. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you so much for your time reading 7 reviewing my poem. Go to FORUM (general). There are 5 pages of responses etc. Also, there is a multi author book that you can add a poem too. Read one of them from the available poems list. Then you can add yours.
Comment from TAB_that's me
This has beautiful sentiments of well wishes. We all miss Brooke. I'll have to write a poem to add to the others. Lovely poem.
teresa
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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This has beautiful sentiments of well wishes. We all miss Brooke. I'll have to write a poem to add to the others. Lovely poem.
teresa
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate your time. I tried to get my poem in the book, but failed. Now, Tom is helping me with that part. Thanks again. Do write a poem. You are a great writer. I could not do free verse like you. Yours is all so well done. Jan
Comment from Joy Graham
This is an uplifting message to Brooke :) I love the image I get of messages blowing in the wind to find the sweet lady. You can add this poem to the book I created and Brooke will find it when she is well enough. The multi author book will allow Brooke to find the messages to her in one place when she is well enough to read them.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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This is an uplifting message to Brooke :) I love the image I get of messages blowing in the wind to find the sweet lady. You can add this poem to the book I created and Brooke will find it when she is well enough. The multi author book will allow Brooke to find the messages to her in one place when she is well enough to read them.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you so much. I did want this in the book. However, I did not know how to do that, so I contacted Tom for help getting it in the book.
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You just click on the Add Chapter button. Then it is just like posting a poem to the site.
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Sorry, I do not understand the process. Tom is helping. I will do better next time.
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Ok. I got my poem included in the book.
Comment from emkoutny
It sounds like you re lucky to have this person in your life and that she was a huge influence on you. We all are pulled up by others and it is important to recognize that help.
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reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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It sounds like you re lucky to have this person in your life and that she was a huge influence on you. We all are pulled up by others and it is important to recognize that help.
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Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
This poem is full of descriptive language including such terms as "carried on breezes," and "flowing through trees". Sure she appreciates this very much and it adds interest to your tribute.
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reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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This poem is full of descriptive language including such terms as "carried on breezes," and "flowing through trees". Sure she appreciates this very much and it adds interest to your tribute.
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Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you so much.
