Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Wandering Minstrel"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
30 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi....
- Great story for the prompt.
- Always another love waiting in the next town because 'The show must go on."'
- Excellent entry for the contest.
Good luck.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Hi....
- Great story for the prompt.
- Always another love waiting in the next town because 'The show must go on."'
- Excellent entry for the contest.
Good luck.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Wrote this one night after a show. Just for the fun of it. Trying to capture some of life out there on the road for many of us guitarslingers. Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from amahra
I'm really digging that art work of the guitar you chose for this writing. I loved the poem; it was fill with heartbreak and romance, with lots of tears. It's a great contest entry. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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I'm really digging that art work of the guitar you chose for this writing. I loved the poem; it was fill with heartbreak and romance, with lots of tears. It's a great contest entry. Great job.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Wrote it one night after a show. Just for the fun of it. Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from Donovan
Of emotions, of love, of breakup, of love and hate and death and dying, mama, apple pie, and the whole thing. It covers a lot of territory, country music does.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Of emotions, of love, of breakup, of love and hate and death and dying, mama, apple pie, and the whole thing. It covers a lot of territory, country music does.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Trying to capture life on the road with this piece of writing. Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from Curly Girly
I enjoyed reading this story poem. They rhyme and rhythm in the first two stanzas was particularly good. It tells of love and loss, and of a womanising male singer.
but, was it worth losing my love I'd like to know?"
but, was it worth losing my love? I'd like to know." / punctuation
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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I enjoyed reading this story poem. They rhyme and rhythm in the first two stanzas was particularly good. It tells of love and loss, and of a womanising male singer.
but, was it worth losing my love I'd like to know?"
but, was it worth losing my love? I'd like to know." / punctuation
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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This guitarsliner, who wrote this one night after a show, thanks you for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much indeed.
Comment from mommerry
This poem/story is probably similar to what every "wandering minstrel" must experience - could be the one but can't stay here long enough to find out if it is! Good job.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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This poem/story is probably similar to what every "wandering minstrel" must experience - could be the one but can't stay here long enough to find out if it is! Good job.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Life on the road for many of us guitarslingers indeed. Thank you for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from Ben Colder
Sounds typical to me. They all sing , but not a tune in the bucket. Best to you in the contest. I think it may stand a chance . Who knows, things happen. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Sounds typical to me. They all sing , but not a tune in the bucket. Best to you in the contest. I think it may stand a chance . Who knows, things happen. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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You've been around guitarslingers. You know what life on the road is like for many of us. Actually wrote this one night after a show. Thanks for your comments and support as always.
Comment from Nosha17
I liked the humour, I guess when the show must go on, life must also. Cute verse, with good use of rhyming and fun story line. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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I liked the humour, I guess when the show must go on, life must also. Cute verse, with good use of rhyming and fun story line. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Wrote this one night after a show. Just for fun. Not a true story. Thanks for your comments and support as always.
Comment from TAB_that's me
A Country Western song perhaps - that is how I hear anyway - kind of a love went wrong kind of song. Well done - sooth flow.
teresa
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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A Country Western song perhaps - that is how I hear anyway - kind of a love went wrong kind of song. Well done - sooth flow.
teresa
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Wrote this one night after a show. Thanks for your comments and support as always. Much appreciated.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely. You made good use of the mandated phrase and turned it into a lyrical journey with a southern fried flavor. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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This meets the contest requirements nicely. You made good use of the mandated phrase and turned it into a lyrical journey with a southern fried flavor. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support. Always appreciate them very much.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job with this writing prompt, I was about to feel sorry for him, but then you ended it with him on the way to another girl in new Orleans, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job with this writing prompt, I was about to feel sorry for him, but then you ended it with him on the way to another girl in new Orleans, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Remember, the contest is called "The show must go on". Thanks for your comments and support.
