Crazy
irritated beyond control17 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
SOMO to you since I blew my allowance early this week. Pulling and cutting is not the answer it/they only grow back. The answer, my friend, you just penned "Getting lost in a cloud". Find a spot -- in the stars, beside a stream, in a garden -- it doesn't matter, any place not made by man's toil (spoil?). Renew you!
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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SOMO to you since I blew my allowance early this week. Pulling and cutting is not the answer it/they only grow back. The answer, my friend, you just penned "Getting lost in a cloud". Find a spot -- in the stars, beside a stream, in a garden -- it doesn't matter, any place not made by man's toil (spoil?). Renew you!
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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thxs for the SOMO lol love your my allowance, quite cute. thxs for your insight and your great comments in this review
lulube
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Lulube,
not crazy, more exasperating... or even that mundane and never changing situation in our lives that allow the need for a 'holiday' within ourselves. It is so easy to want to change our outward appearance out of a frustration to make things seem different and more palatable... I know, I do it with facial hair all of the time... add or remove... and while at times, it is a distraction, it does not address the core problem... so in saying that, I really gelled with your metaphors and chuckle at the thought.
I believe it's about not getting stuck like a needle on a scratched record... we must allow our thought process to complete the full cycle, so we don't create a problem to ourselves concentrating on the stoppage from the 'scratch'... remember we can only ever control the way one person thinks or acts, and that's our-self.
I know this was a long time coming, but it is deserved, you dug deep and constructed a gusty poem... well done!
With our thoughts we create,
the ability to filter distraction,
to allow us to become the person
we need to be for forward progress.
James vx's.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Hi Lulube,
not crazy, more exasperating... or even that mundane and never changing situation in our lives that allow the need for a 'holiday' within ourselves. It is so easy to want to change our outward appearance out of a frustration to make things seem different and more palatable... I know, I do it with facial hair all of the time... add or remove... and while at times, it is a distraction, it does not address the core problem... so in saying that, I really gelled with your metaphors and chuckle at the thought.
I believe it's about not getting stuck like a needle on a scratched record... we must allow our thought process to complete the full cycle, so we don't create a problem to ourselves concentrating on the stoppage from the 'scratch'... remember we can only ever control the way one person thinks or acts, and that's our-self.
I know this was a long time coming, but it is deserved, you dug deep and constructed a gusty poem... well done!
With our thoughts we create,
the ability to filter distraction,
to allow us to become the person
we need to be for forward progress.
James vx's.
Comment Written 25-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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JJJ
Boy did you ever hit a nerve with your insight. All the way around and above the world from you to me.
Thxs for that!!!!!
Life doesn't always seem to dish out happiness and gloom evenly, sometimes one gets all the gloom no matter how hard they strive for that happy, fulfilled life. No matter how many times they turn their backs on negative situations, negativity bites them on the ass. So they crawl to bed exhausted, to wake up with a fresh attitude, crossing their fingers that no bumps or blockades are around the corner.
I am going to make a poster for my room of your "With our thoughts we create"
Goodnight JJJ
thxs for the 6 stars that are shining so bright
lulube/lori
Comment from lakeport
Crazy, indeed to many things going more and more crazy among mankind as the population grows faster and faster. Thanks for sharing your heartfelt words. God bless you. Hugs! Lakeport.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Crazy, indeed to many things going more and more crazy among mankind as the population grows faster and faster. Thanks for sharing your heartfelt words. God bless you. Hugs! Lakeport.
Comment Written 25-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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you are so right there, lakey. thxs for your wonderful comments in this review.
lulube
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you are very welcome,Hugs! lakeport.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Welcome to the realities of life. I definitely agree totally with your notes and what you said in this well written poem of yours. People can drive you crazy and some times it does not take very long either. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Welcome to the realities of life. I definitely agree totally with your notes and what you said in this well written poem of yours. People can drive you crazy and some times it does not take very long either. Well done.
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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thxs for your insight for this poem. Yes I agree with you that it doesn't have to take very long at all some times.
Crazy is crazy though.
thxs for stopping by and for your review.\
lulube
Comment from danpald
Frustration comes with life
That is the way things are
Still to be able to scream
To release the pain inside
When time of stress becomes a pain
It is time to move to the garage
There to pile high the empty boxes
Than take out the rage that is growing
From the toes to the top of the head
Take the most distressing thought to shred
Take a bat in hand to use with flair
Attacking the boxes without remorse
Than the calm becomes your life
For more than a month at times you do not suffer
Just a release of the stress from others
That cause you to scream without wonder
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Frustration comes with life
That is the way things are
Still to be able to scream
To release the pain inside
When time of stress becomes a pain
It is time to move to the garage
There to pile high the empty boxes
Than take out the rage that is growing
From the toes to the top of the head
Take the most distressing thought to shred
Take a bat in hand to use with flair
Attacking the boxes without remorse
Than the calm becomes your life
For more than a month at times you do not suffer
Just a release of the stress from others
That cause you to scream without wonder
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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thxs Dan his is wonderful to receive in response to my crazy moment. I like your solution, only problem is I live in an apartment. thxs so much for stopping by and for your unique p[oem
hope you post it as a response to mine
lulube
Comment from Pantygynt
And a SOMO. Well you invented them so its only fair you should take some of your own medicine. Help? Well just lie back and let it all wash over you. If that doesn't help start screaming. Would it help if I told you had written a really good piece of free verse on thesubject of stress? No? Oh, you knew that already! Right.
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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And a SOMO. Well you invented them so its only fair you should take some of your own medicine. Help? Well just lie back and let it all wash over you. If that doesn't help start screaming. Would it help if I told you had written a really good piece of free verse on thesubject of stress? No? Oh, you knew that already! Right.
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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lol Funny. Love the SOMO. Love that you stopped by, I needed some humor right now. lol And yes, it did help to tell me. Glad you enjoyed it.
thxs for stopping by and for your great review.
lulube
Comment from gazzagodbod
Heyyy Looby Loo I misssed ya love this fab poem and ill be your burley stranger any day great to be back and great to read one of yours first xxgazzagodbodxx
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Heyyy Looby Loo I misssed ya love this fab poem and ill be your burley stranger any day great to be back and great to read one of yours first xxgazzagodbodxx
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Het you back gazza
Where you been? lol Too bad you're on the other side of the world from me. Exactly where my daughter is going in a few weeks to live with her beau, for a couple of years. If they don't break up and she comes home early. lol
Not sure where they are going to end up, but in England somewhere.
thxs for coming back and reading this one.
lulube
Comment from patcelaw
I can feel the frustrations you are feeling as you wrote this piece. We cannot control others, what they say, what they do or how they think. All we can do it strive to the best person we can be. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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I can feel the frustrations you are feeling as you wrote this piece. We cannot control others, what they say, what they do or how they think. All we can do it strive to the best person we can be. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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thxs for the confidence to strive. lol There's just those little moments that, screaming sounds pretty good. lol
thxs for your great review.
lulube
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Lulube - Great poem! Don't let it get to you. I know what you mean and I can identify - I sometimes feel like you do. Best to get on with your life and ignore all around you who are driving you nuts - hope it's not me LOL. If it is, ignore me a well. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Hi Lulube - Great poem! Don't let it get to you. I know what you mean and I can identify - I sometimes feel like you do. Best to get on with your life and ignore all around you who are driving you nuts - hope it's not me LOL. If it is, ignore me a well. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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no no no, Dorothy, never you. I love to hear from you and get your support. Your ideas are pretty good too. thxs for that. thxs for your time and for your review
lulube
Comment from TAB_that's me
I don't know whether to laugh or scream with you - lol. I work with the public and some make me scream too. good rant poem. Hope it made you feel better:)
teresa
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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I don't know whether to laugh or scream with you - lol. I work with the public and some make me scream too. good rant poem. Hope it made you feel better:)
teresa
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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thxs for the support in knowing Teresa. lol glad you got a kick out of it.
lulube
