Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Funny and a not quite horrorifying sight but disturbing put some clothes on I'm like the kids Cute story and well presented with classic end

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

Comment from justafan

Excellent

Total terror felt here....oh yes and then the story...lol. Just messin with ya :) The video was a total hoot Mikey..a stroke of genius!!! I am smiling...

Always justafan,
Missy

 Comment Written 26-May-2015

Comment from socrates2011

Excellent

Psychotic story, the way the boy's dad said it would happen to him and it did. It reminds me of this video my friends showed me called "Humans can lick too." God, it was scary. This lady is asleep in bed and she keeps waking up because she thinks she hears her bathroom facet dripping. It is but she doesn't tend to it. Well, she puts her hand down beside her bed and her dog licks her fingers. The whole time it's her dog until the end when she sees a bloody message on the wall and in the bathroom. Instead of her dog it's a bearded man under her bed. Five stars for horror.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

That sounds absolutely terrifying. I'm glad it isn't entered! Thanks for the great review. :))

Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

"It happened to POPS." Pops. You're using it as a name so it should be capitalized.

What a horrible little video. The guy looks naked at first glance. He'll regret this one when he's a grandfather and it's still out there. LOL! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Thank you for catching that. Yep, I hope this isn't his finest hour, but I fear that it is! :)

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Hmm. This one is going very fast and is a bit confusing. I think there is some comedy here, but it may need more of a horror feel and a resolution. 100 words is very short for a complete tale.

 Comment Written 22-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

I tend to over complicate. I'll take a look. Thanks for the great input.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements for sure. I am torn between terror and laughing at the obvious humor in the delivery of this piece. I wish you the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

That's what I was hoping for!! Thank you so much. :))

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Great title and Dads dance what fun. Great 100 word horror story and the -
slow dance honey - Well done. Like the ending line, well thought out this little horror story.

 Comment Written 20-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great review!

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Macabre, to say the least. The feeling of cold-blooded insanity that you conjure up here is remarkable. A Devil-inspired dance indeed. The accompanying visuals help to set the scene.

 Comment Written 20-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

He's a creepy guy, that's for sure. Glad you got a kick out of it. :)

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi...

Excellent take on the prompt to turn in from 'Horror' to 'Horror Reality.' This is a Reality TV Show in and of itself!

Good luck in the contest---super entry.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 20-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Thank you so much. I'm delighted you enjoyed. We'll see how it goes!! :)

Comment from nordicgirl

Exceptional

Hard to believe the complexity of this piece. Veru complete and horrifying. It even has a lot of implied.backstory which is rasily imagined. Horrifying image to say the least.

 Comment Written 20-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Yep. I've lost a little weight since then. I can do a cartwheel now. :__()