I'm The One
Went back up that mountain27 total reviews
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Tarnished Knight: Congrats on the all time best awards! You paint a great picture of God's creations, one at a time. We can sit and see these animals with you. I, of course, like the eagle! When we walk dogs, we see deer. They don't mind the dogs. Everyday, enjoy the presence of The Lord. Let Jesus sit with you. He loves you from the tip of your nose to the bottom of your toes! Keep writing! flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Tarnished Knight: Congrats on the all time best awards! You paint a great picture of God's creations, one at a time. We can sit and see these animals with you. I, of course, like the eagle! When we walk dogs, we see deer. They don't mind the dogs. Everyday, enjoy the presence of The Lord. Let Jesus sit with you. He loves you from the tip of your nose to the bottom of your toes! Keep writing! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 23-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thank you very much again Nancy for you kind words and great review
tk
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent declaration of faith. The Creator of everything took time to speak with you and show you a few of his creations. As you point out, we each have to discover if He exists on our own. Does someone really care? Each person must seek their own answer.
I like your straightforward presentation. Excellent flowing meter and well chosen rhymes and near rhymes. You chose a beautiful picture to compliment yr work.
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Excellent declaration of faith. The Creator of everything took time to speak with you and show you a few of his creations. As you point out, we each have to discover if He exists on our own. Does someone really care? Each person must seek their own answer.
I like your straightforward presentation. Excellent flowing meter and well chosen rhymes and near rhymes. You chose a beautiful picture to compliment yr work.
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Again I thank you
tk
Comment from patcelaw
Just as part one this one created a beautiful view from on that mountain top. I look forward to reading the next part. Patricia
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Just as part one this one created a beautiful view from on that mountain top. I look forward to reading the next part. Patricia
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 23-May-2015
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Thank you again Lady Patricia
tk
Comment from K. Lorraine
I'm so sorry that it took so long for me to read the first, second and third parts of your trip up the mountain. There is so much to digest in each one and yet the parts work beautifully together to make a complete story. I admire you and your wonderful work... Please continue to do what you do so well. Many of us count on learning from the different sides of you. Always a friend. Lady Kay
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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I'm so sorry that it took so long for me to read the first, second and third parts of your trip up the mountain. There is so much to digest in each one and yet the parts work beautifully together to make a complete story. I admire you and your wonderful work... Please continue to do what you do so well. Many of us count on learning from the different sides of you. Always a friend. Lady Kay
Comment Written 21-May-2015
reply by the author on 21-May-2015
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Thank you again My Lady Kay!!!
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha ATK,
I love your mountain poems about meeting God, wish you really believed the words you write about, God loves you and so do I.
Aloha,
Your Sweetie,
Gingerella
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Aloha ATK,
I love your mountain poems about meeting God, wish you really believed the words you write about, God loves you and so do I.
Aloha,
Your Sweetie,
Gingerella
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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I should change the Title to You're The One!!! Love you too you little Mermaid !!
tk
Comment from judiverse
Excellent thoughts about God's power of being able to make the eagle fly and create the mountain top and other wonders. The narrator is at a time when he sometimes questions the existence of God, but the Creator points out all those wonderful things of nature. The narrator has sought out the mountain top as a place to be close to God, but He tells him he just needs to get down on his knew and pray. Excellent ABCB rhyme, and the flow is excellent. judi
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Excellent thoughts about God's power of being able to make the eagle fly and create the mountain top and other wonders. The narrator is at a time when he sometimes questions the existence of God, but the Creator points out all those wonderful things of nature. The narrator has sought out the mountain top as a place to be close to God, but He tells him he just needs to get down on his knew and pray. Excellent ABCB rhyme, and the flow is excellent. judi
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Thank you very much Judi..Part 3 is in the cyber case and ready to post as soon as I make some more $$$ lol The Title not sure yet but you will know it when you see it
Hugs from the Big Island of Hawaii
tk
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You're very welcome. Happy trails. judi
Comment from pharp
WOW, I read your first visit to the mountain top and decided to read your second one before I rated the first; the reason only God knows why, I do know that I (you see I am a weepy sensitive person) can honestly tell you this poem made me cry. Beautifully written from the heart. I have never been so touched as I have been today after reading this spiritually filled poem. Thanks for bringing tears and a smile to my face. EXCEPTIONALLY DONE!!!!!! Portia (now I will go back and rate the first one I reviewed)
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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WOW, I read your first visit to the mountain top and decided to read your second one before I rated the first; the reason only God knows why, I do know that I (you see I am a weepy sensitive person) can honestly tell you this poem made me cry. Beautifully written from the heart. I have never been so touched as I have been today after reading this spiritually filled poem. Thanks for bringing tears and a smile to my face. EXCEPTIONALLY DONE!!!!!! Portia (now I will go back and rate the first one I reviewed)
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Lady Portia I thank you so very much...It was nice of you to join me on the Mt Top. Your words have also touched a spot with as well and I do so appreciate them immensely..
ALOHA HUGS from The Islands
TK
Comment from nomi338
Whoa, am I going to have to start addressing you as the Right Reverend? LOL. You display a certain measure of talent in this arena and that surprises me, as I did not think that you had much interest in this type of poetry. Imagine that, eve I can be wrong about something. Hmmm.
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Whoa, am I going to have to start addressing you as the Right Reverend? LOL. You display a certain measure of talent in this arena and that surprises me, as I did not think that you had much interest in this type of poetry. Imagine that, eve I can be wrong about something. Hmmm.
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Ha ha e I can fool you nah but it sure is fun to try lol Thanks much my good man for those inspirational words..Part 3 is done just have to raise some money to post it
tk
Comment from justafan
I agree with Smurfgirlsasha...inspiring without the Bible thumping. You certainly have a talent for bringing emotion to the surface TK. I am certainly a fan!!
Always justafan,
Lady M
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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I agree with Smurfgirlsasha...inspiring without the Bible thumping. You certainly have a talent for bringing emotion to the surface TK. I am certainly a fan!!
Always justafan,
Lady M
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Thank you much my pretty Lady...No Bible thumping will you ever see from these fingers that's for sure Part 3 you may see a little twist in faith or is that fate hehehe
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You always have the ability to make me smile my Knight!!
Comment from Nosha17
What lovely imagery and spiritual message. You are so right, you don't have to go to such lengths to have proof of the works of God, simply have faith and pray. Excellent rhyming and message. I spotted a few errors: Verse 9, is there........as Christ? Verse 10, Those problems will not dwell (dwell is an intransitive verb-no object, you can't dwell a problem) Verse 11, its start (it's = it is) Verse 12, Did someone really care? Most enjoyable. Faye
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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What lovely imagery and spiritual message. You are so right, you don't have to go to such lengths to have proof of the works of God, simply have faith and pray. Excellent rhyming and message. I spotted a few errors: Verse 9, is there........as Christ? Verse 10, Those problems will not dwell (dwell is an intransitive verb-no object, you can't dwell a problem) Verse 11, its start (it's = it is) Verse 12, Did someone really care? Most enjoyable. Faye
Comment Written 20-May-2015
reply by the author on 20-May-2015
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Thank you so much for the spag corrections Lady Faye I always need and appreciate the help ..Going to go back and correct..That dwell might be a bit difficult to change but will give it a shot
TK
