I Have A Magic Ship
Welcome aboard my lovely28 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
You didn't warn me about sea sickness TK. Wouldn't you know my trip would be on stormy seas. LOL Nice try though with a delightful up lifting poem. Nice rhyme and flow. Well done. :<) Nancy
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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You didn't warn me about sea sickness TK. Wouldn't you know my trip would be on stormy seas. LOL Nice try though with a delightful up lifting poem. Nice rhyme and flow. Well done. :<) Nancy
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Thank you so much for coming aboard Lady Nancy . I hope you enjoyed the journey and you are welcome to board my magic ship anytime!!!
Comment from DALLAS01
Hi, T.K
I enjoyed this fantasy journey. The crux of the matter is so eloquently referenced in your 2nd verse. Can't work any other way.
If you carry baggage
Please stow it at the pier
This is a happy ship
Problems we refuse hear
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Hi, T.K
I enjoyed this fantasy journey. The crux of the matter is so eloquently referenced in your 2nd verse. Can't work any other way.
If you carry baggage
Please stow it at the pier
This is a happy ship
Problems we refuse hear
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Thank you so much for coming aboard Dallas . I hope you enjoyed the journey and you are welcome to board my magic ship anytime!!!
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Children will enjoy Mary's place indeed and this poem. Easy to follow story line and free flowing action make it enjoyable for them.
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Children will enjoy Mary's place indeed and this poem. Easy to follow story line and free flowing action make it enjoyable for them.
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 17-May-2015
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Thank you so much for coming aboard Brett . I hope you enjoyed the journey and you are welcome to board my magic ship anytime!!!
Comment from justafan
To hear? Instead of refuse hear? . I got aboard but I think my captain jumped ship :) it's a beautiful piece of art Sir Knight.
Always
Lady M
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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To hear? Instead of refuse hear? . I got aboard but I think my captain jumped ship :) it's a beautiful piece of art Sir Knight.
Always
Lady M
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Oh my Lady M. What Captain would abandon such a lovely lady?? Surely not I now maybe Capt Tarnish might have some different ideas though lol
tk
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great presentation. The picture is perfect. Good job with the rhyme. The flow of lines is easy to follow and continues throughout.
I see nothing to change. Thanks for sharing a great, but fun, poem.
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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This is a great presentation. The picture is perfect. Good job with the rhyme. The flow of lines is easy to follow and continues throughout.
I see nothing to change. Thanks for sharing a great, but fun, poem.
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Thank you for coming aboard my Magic Ship Janny..You can come aboard again anytime you wish
TK
Comment from K. Lorraine
I've stowed my bags at the pier and I'm ready to board the magic ship. I'm young at heart and I'm looking forward to this trip. Please spare me any boring detail since I don't want to lose a smile that's big as a whale. So Captain Knight, please keep your promise that there is no fare. I'm as poor as a church mouse and I don't have a nickle to spare. Thank you for another trip over Mary's bridge, but now I must leave and shop for food because there is nothing left in the fridge. I still think your rhyme is amazing and I've been using RhymeZone for years, but my poems don't hold a candle to those of my pears. Until next time... Lady Kay
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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I've stowed my bags at the pier and I'm ready to board the magic ship. I'm young at heart and I'm looking forward to this trip. Please spare me any boring detail since I don't want to lose a smile that's big as a whale. So Captain Knight, please keep your promise that there is no fare. I'm as poor as a church mouse and I don't have a nickle to spare. Thank you for another trip over Mary's bridge, but now I must leave and shop for food because there is nothing left in the fridge. I still think your rhyme is amazing and I've been using RhymeZone for years, but my poems don't hold a candle to those of my pears. Until next time... Lady Kay
Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Lady Kay thank you so much for coming aboard my Magic Ship and visiting me at Mary's Place as well. You can board my ship anytime and the only payment will be a smile and that you enjoyed the trip
tk
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Sail on into the magical mist without me fore thoust has many chores of a scullery maid to do today... I am only a lady in waiting, therefore, I must do my own laundry and cleaning. But I do it with a smile. K
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I am off to Mary's place right now and finding my own magic ship to take me to all the lovely exciting places I want to see. What a lovely idea of yours, I think we should all go to Mary's place! See you there! xsx sandra
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reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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I am off to Mary's place right now and finding my own magic ship to take me to all the lovely exciting places I want to see. What a lovely idea of yours, I think we should all go to Mary's place! See you there! xsx sandra
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Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Thank you for sailing with me Lady Kay and also visiting me at Mary's Place..My ship wil always welcome you aboard and my door at Mary's will always be open so you can come on in
tk
Comment from Sasha
This is marvelous. I do love your magic ship and agree, all baggage must be left ashore. I really enjoyed this and love the rhythm and rhyme as well as the lovely story it tells. Keep up the great work.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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This is marvelous. I do love your magic ship and agree, all baggage must be left ashore. I really enjoyed this and love the rhythm and rhyme as well as the lovely story it tells. Keep up the great work.
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Comment Written 17-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Thank you so much for sailing with me SG..You can board my ship anytime..The only fee will be a smile and that you enjoyed the trip
TK
