I Have A Magic Ship
Welcome aboard my lovely28 total reviews
Comment from Walu Feral
LOL. G'day TK. I don't know about a magic ship but you have a magic poetry writing talent mate. This is a fun little piece, it's a bit like a breath of fresh air to me Sir. Well done and cheers, Fez
reply by the author on 19-May-2015
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LOL. G'day TK. I don't know about a magic ship but you have a magic poetry writing talent mate. This is a fun little piece, it's a bit like a breath of fresh air to me Sir. Well done and cheers, Fez
Comment Written 19-May-2015
reply by the author on 19-May-2015
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Thank you my feral friend...I am very glad you took the invite to come aboard and enjoyed the voyage You are welcome to board my ships anytime my friend..
TK
Comment from Treischel
Ah, what a wonderful place is your Mary's Place. Now there a ship to sail. Permission to come aboard Captain, sir Tarnished Knight. Here is a good name for your ship: Windsong.
reply by the author on 19-May-2015
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Ah, what a wonderful place is your Mary's Place. Now there a ship to sail. Permission to come aboard Captain, sir Tarnished Knight. Here is a good name for your ship: Windsong.
Comment Written 18-May-2015
reply by the author on 19-May-2015
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Thank you Mr T for coming aboard my Magic Sailing Ship...You are always welcome to board..The only fare will be a smile after your voyage is done ...
TK
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha ATK,
I've been on Your wonderful "RelationShip". What a ride and to be able to leave all burdens on the shore, and to think I met you and yourwonderful poetry at Mary's Place. What a miracle.
Aloha and Hula Hugs,
Gingerella
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Aloha ATK,
I've been on Your wonderful "RelationShip". What a ride and to be able to leave all burdens on the shore, and to think I met you and yourwonderful poetry at Mary's Place. What a miracle.
Aloha and Hula Hugs,
Gingerella
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 18-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Thank you sweeti Yes as I have said Mary's place is a very special place made even more so by your presence !!!
XXOO
TK
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Wonderful writing. Books or writing as well as movies or songs can carry us away with their story or message. Fluently written.
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 19-May-2015
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Wonderful writing. Books or writing as well as movies or songs can carry us away with their story or message. Fluently written.
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 18-May-2015
reply by the author on 19-May-2015
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Thank you so very much Lady Butterfly..I am happy you came aboard my Magic Ship and that you enjoyed the voyage as well.. You can board my ships anytime..Remember though the fare has increased You must leave with a smile or I make you walk the plank heheh
tk
Comment from patcelaw
If you carry baggage
Please stow it at the pier
This is a happy ship
Problems we refuse to hear
How many of us have a lot of baggage we carry, and then wonder why no matter where we go our trip is never happy because we tried to carry the baggage with us. I enjoyed this poem. Blessings Patricia
reply by the author on 19-May-2015
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If you carry baggage
Please stow it at the pier
This is a happy ship
Problems we refuse to hear
How many of us have a lot of baggage we carry, and then wonder why no matter where we go our trip is never happy because we tried to carry the baggage with us. I enjoyed this poem. Blessings Patricia
Comment Written 18-May-2015
reply by the author on 19-May-2015
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Thank you very much Patricia...You are so right about the baggage.. I am happy you came aboard my Magic Ship and that you enjoyed the voyage as well.. You can board my ships anytime..Remember though the fare has increased You must leave with a smile or I make you walk the plank heheh
tk
I am sure when I board your ship I will laugh I usually do. If not I will gladly walk the plank. Ha Ha
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ahoy, Matey! Shiver me timbers... Aye...it's off ya go, now, me bucko. I'll join ye on yer trip ya scallywag. We'll meet up with the likes of Davey Jones, Captain jack Sparrow and the infamous Black Pearl. The Flying Dutchmen is all stocked up. She's ready to set sail for the salty surf and seven seas, mate. Cast off, and may God be with ye...
Great stuff, TK. Sorry about falling off into Pirate Speak momentarily. Your well written poem had that...unique effect on me, heh-heh.
Write On & Right On, my friend. ~Dean
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Ahoy, Matey! Shiver me timbers... Aye...it's off ya go, now, me bucko. I'll join ye on yer trip ya scallywag. We'll meet up with the likes of Davey Jones, Captain jack Sparrow and the infamous Black Pearl. The Flying Dutchmen is all stocked up. She's ready to set sail for the salty surf and seven seas, mate. Cast off, and may God be with ye...
Great stuff, TK. Sorry about falling off into Pirate Speak momentarily. Your well written poem had that...unique effect on me, heh-heh.
Write On & Right On, my friend. ~Dean
Comment Written 18-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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How cool was that my friend why way cool indeed Thank you for coming aboard my Magic Ship..You are welcome anytime my friend..Now I have pirate adventure of my own My alter ego Capt. Tarnish...I wil have to do a follow up with him He has a ship called Adonis Why because it beautiful like him hahahaha
tk
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It's always a pleasure to read and respond to your talented writes, my friend.
Take care...
~Dean
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi T.K.,
What a fun-to-read and bouncy poem this is. I love the line:
If you carry baggage
Please stow it at the pier
We all need a little magic in our lives and I'd buy a ticket if they were for sale.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Hi T.K.,
What a fun-to-read and bouncy poem this is. I love the line:
If you carry baggage
Please stow it at the pier
We all need a little magic in our lives and I'd buy a ticket if they were for sale.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 18-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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No tickets for sale Louise you can com3e anytime the only fare is a smile and to enjoy the ride..Thank you for reading and commenting on my Magic Ship !!
TK
Comment from Chrissy710
What a fun poem and very easy to read it almost had a tune to it. I liked your invitation request to stow carry on baggage at the pier. A simple but great poem liked it TK Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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What a fun poem and very easy to read it almost had a tune to it. I liked your invitation request to stow carry on baggage at the pier. A simple but great poem liked it TK Cheers Christine
Comment Written 18-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Thank you for coming aboard my Magic Ship Chrissy I am glad you enjoyed the trip..Remember you are always welcome and the only fare will be a smile!!!
TK
Comment from misscookie
Did you mean problems are refuse here or hear. Other than that I love the words to your poem
I would love to travel on your magic ship.
Cookie
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Did you mean problems are refuse here or hear. Other than that I love the words to your poem
I would love to travel on your magic ship.
Cookie
Comment Written 18-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Thank you very Miss C. for coming aboard my ship..I wll check that here/hear situation right away..I can't remember why I wrote that Thanks for catching it
Aloha
TK
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If you are like me sometimes my mind gets a head of my fingers and make little errors.
Until next time.
Cookie.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Wow! Where is Mary's Place?
I really enjoyed the touch of magic and positivity in your writing.
Such a place seems almost tangible and how wonderful it would be to
leave excess baggage behind.
The words flowed with smooth cadence and mixed meter.
The tale just 'grabbed' me and I was entranced by its magical promise.
Check line4 in second last stanza -hear = ? here.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Wow! Where is Mary's Place?
I really enjoyed the touch of magic and positivity in your writing.
Such a place seems almost tangible and how wonderful it would be to
leave excess baggage behind.
The words flowed with smooth cadence and mixed meter.
The tale just 'grabbed' me and I was entranced by its magical promise.
Check line4 in second last stanza -hear = ? here.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 18-May-2015
reply by the author on 18-May-2015
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Where is Mary's Place Lady Shirley? Why we all have one.. especially if we write...I have seen you go there many times myself. But I am very glad you came aboard my Magic Ship and that it made you smile..You can board again anytime you like..Remember the only fare is a smile so you have no excuse ...The hear/here is something I seemed to have miss as 3 people have asked me to check on it..Going to correct right after I send this Thanks again
tk
