Pollutants
The cause of the changes in the environment.42 total reviews
Comment from inside echo
Your poem follows the contest requirements perfectly. It incorporates air, your syllable is perfect, and it flows well and remains on topic. On top of it, it is written truthfully, our earth and it's inhabitants are all at risk of not having safe enough air to sustain life. Well done. Thank you for writing about a very relevant topic. Well done.
echo
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reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Your poem follows the contest requirements perfectly. It incorporates air, your syllable is perfect, and it flows well and remains on topic. On top of it, it is written truthfully, our earth and it's inhabitants are all at risk of not having safe enough air to sustain life. Well done. Thank you for writing about a very relevant topic. Well done.
echo
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Comment Written 11-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Thanks for the five stars and nice comment.
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You're welcome.
Comment from amahra
Hey, great. Very few words, but oh so powerful a message that you bring. Loved the art work that you chose for this writing. Great job with the haiku.
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reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Hey, great. Very few words, but oh so powerful a message that you bring. Loved the art work that you chose for this writing. Great job with the haiku.
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Comment Written 11-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Thanks for the five stars and comment.
