Pollutants
The cause of the changes in the environment.42 total reviews
Comment from Benny Beeharry
You have got a point there. The pollution is not only outside, but also inside the house where so much detergent is used.
A great idea and a great of telling that truth.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
You have got a point there. The pollution is not only outside, but also inside the house where so much detergent is used.
A great idea and a great of telling that truth.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
Comment from LIJ Red
Yes polluted air is unhealthy, but pollutants strike water and soil as bad as the atmosphere. However, since I am no judge, and since the 3/5/3 is gospel truth,
excellent.
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
Yes polluted air is unhealthy, but pollutants strike water and soil as bad as the atmosphere. However, since I am no judge, and since the 3/5/3 is gospel truth,
excellent.
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a great 3-5-3 air poem with the perfect syllable count. You speak the truth in this:) Good luck to you.
Teresa
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
This is a great 3-5-3 air poem with the perfect syllable count. You speak the truth in this:) Good luck to you.
Teresa
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
Comment from jim lawler
You verse meets the qualifications and reads like one continious sentence; which I think is good. Some works Are jerky and flows unsmoothly and makes for incongruous I didn't see any typos and it needs no revision. Good luck and god bless. Jim.
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
You verse meets the qualifications and reads like one continious sentence; which I think is good. Some works Are jerky and flows unsmoothly and makes for incongruous I didn't see any typos and it needs no revision. Good luck and god bless. Jim.
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
Comment from misscookie
The artwork is beautiful except for the air filled with pollution
It's not getting better each year it's get worst. just how much can our lungs take.
You did a great write.
Cookie
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
The artwork is beautiful except for the air filled with pollution
It's not getting better each year it's get worst. just how much can our lungs take.
You did a great write.
Cookie
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment.
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You're very welcome, have a blessed weekend.
Cookie
Comment from Dean Kuch
No doubt! We are slowly killing our planet, our home. Once we do detroy the oceans, the air and the soil, then what? Are we gonna make seven year trips to colonize Mars? Why should we be allowed to screw up another planet, one far worse off than Earth?
I just don't get mankind sometimes...
Great message, good syllable count.
Good luck! ~Dean
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
No doubt! We are slowly killing our planet, our home. Once we do detroy the oceans, the air and the soil, then what? Are we gonna make seven year trips to colonize Mars? Why should we be allowed to screw up another planet, one far worse off than Earth?
I just don't get mankind sometimes...
Great message, good syllable count.
Good luck! ~Dean
Comment Written 12-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment. This not a joking matter as you know, but in humor to what you wrote one can say if we mess this one up, we'll get another one. I knew it was serious but I didn't realize until I started reading
of how serious it is. It seems there is a dark side of progress.
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I believe there is a dark side to everything.
You're very welcome... ;)
~Dean
Comment from Alan K Pease
A short but poignant statement about pollution - indoors or outdoor. Good luck in the writing prompt. You might be interested in a poem I just have posted - about what I saw in China and their pollution problems as researched afterwards.
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
A short but poignant statement about pollution - indoors or outdoor. Good luck in the writing prompt. You might be interested in a poem I just have posted - about what I saw in China and their pollution problems as researched afterwards.
Comment Written 12-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Thank you for the five stars and comment. I noticed when I was searching for my work that you had one about pollution. Before I worked on my 3-6-3 I found in the web information about pollution.
Outdoors and indoors, for instance, indoors have smoke, chemicals and etc. to pollute the air making a person unhealthy in time.
Comment from rjuselius
This is an ok entry for this particular writing prompt dear friend!
It is slightly all over the place and doesn't really hit the mark only in my humble opinion.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck with the contest!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
This is an ok entry for this particular writing prompt dear friend!
It is slightly all over the place and doesn't really hit the mark only in my humble opinion.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck with the contest!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 12-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Thanks for the five stars and comment. I looked on the web found that pollutants can be in your home as well.
They can be from chemicals or a system you have in your home that throws out air.
And to summarize it, indoors or outdoors it is unhealthy to breath such air.
Comment from Pantygynt
Certainly a true statement and the syllable count is fine I just didn't have to take my boots off. but is it air? In part certainly, outdoors. Indoors? Of course. We couldn't breathe otherwise. That's all right then. Excellent!
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
Certainly a true statement and the syllable count is fine I just didn't have to take my boots off. but is it air? In part certainly, outdoors. Indoors? Of course. We couldn't breathe otherwise. That's all right then. Excellent!
Comment Written 12-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Thanks for the five stars and the comment.
Comment from Chris Tee
I have just read another entry and this poem is also great and on per with the other. Well done with this entry and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
I have just read another entry and this poem is also great and on per with the other. Well done with this entry and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Thanks for the five stars and the comment.