Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Amen!
Your wrote a mouthful this should be a bullet to give to every parent.
So are mothers so young they just don't understand.
Cookie

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 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thanks Cookie for the review.

reply by misscookie on 08-May-2015

You're very welcome. have a bless and happy weekend.
Cookie

Comment from Maritza M. Mejia

Good

Interested Biblical allution of the instruction on parenting. I think you should make a remarks about the bibilical quote.
The imagery matches the picture and theme of this poem.
My best part of this bible quote
"Fathers and mothers be sure
You don't provoke your children"
Regards,
Maritza


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 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

Thanks Maritza for the lovely review and I did make not of the scripture from which I got the inspiration.

reply by Maritza M. Mejia on 08-May-2015

Thank you!