To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Ashes To Dust"Free Verse Poetry
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Comment from Mary H-W
Isn't that often the way...? Our finished product isn't always what we set-out to write.
A very good job. I like the unpredictability of how many lines and syllables will follow each line and verse. There's a deep message, and I think the ending (the parting of ways) is profound.
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Isn't that often the way...? Our finished product isn't always what we set-out to write.
A very good job. I like the unpredictability of how many lines and syllables will follow each line and verse. There's a deep message, and I think the ending (the parting of ways) is profound.
Comment Written 07-May-2015
Comment from kriver
Hi,
This poem seems to flows well.
The rhythm seems smooth to me.
The word choice is good.
Over all it is a good write.
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Hi,
This poem seems to flows well.
The rhythm seems smooth to me.
The word choice is good.
Over all it is a good write.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-May-2015
