Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "A Bill"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from GracieAnn
Interesting presentation and format with decisive direction and gives one view of the greed of mankind. All too revealing. Nice work. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Interesting presentation and format with decisive direction and gives one view of the greed of mankind. All too revealing. Nice work. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Glad you found interest in this work, thanking you for generous rate and welcomed comments
Comment from Mary H-W
Well said. I guess some people do put that much importance on each and every $1 they can get their hands on.
Here in Canada, we abolished the one dollar bill a long time ago...and the two dollar bill as well. Our smallest note is the $5.
BTW, one typo I noticed as follows:
Mammon worshipped more then GOD will
'then' should read THAN
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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Well said. I guess some people do put that much importance on each and every $1 they can get their hands on.
Here in Canada, we abolished the one dollar bill a long time ago...and the two dollar bill as well. Our smallest note is the $5.
BTW, one typo I noticed as follows:
Mammon worshipped more then GOD will
'then' should read THAN
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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So I will assume you still have coins to balance or different complete though of investing thanking you comments and way generous rate and great heads up will take care of that my nightmare in print then and than
Comment from Clover77
This poem was truly deep. Well written Tpac, well written. I feel lucky to even had read this. I bid you luck on your future works.
~Julia
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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This poem was truly deep. Well written Tpac, well written. I feel lucky to even had read this. I bid you luck on your future works.
~Julia
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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Kind of you to say so, I return twelve fold wishes to you and your wor efforts as well. Thanks for the pat and over generous rate
Comment from costellsgirl33
Oh the things people will do for money! However, it is needed to live. You have to pay bills, eat, go to school. So, it's not all bad. But it still frightens me what people will do for it. Humiliate themselves on national television, steal, kill, etc....it's very sad.
Nice poem and I so understand the point you are making. Very nice
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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Oh the things people will do for money! However, it is needed to live. You have to pay bills, eat, go to school. So, it's not all bad. But it still frightens me what people will do for it. Humiliate themselves on national television, steal, kill, etc....it's very sad.
Nice poem and I so understand the point you are making. Very nice
Comment Written 06-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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With all these good rates, I wonder if you guys are together having too many sips. Thanking you for kindness and forgiveness for offense Again flattered by generous rate, Assume this is a defined free verse statement, but enough about me; I see you understood the note points of conveyances. Did you capture the close to end verse point
Align a contract with hell: and understand this intent by me?
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lol!!!! It was just a really good poem :). But I always enjoy you work.
Arnetta
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lol!!!! It was just a really good poem :). But I always enjoy you work.
Arnetta
Comment from Brett Matthew West
The "almighty," or so it thinks, dollar bill. Lot of truth in this poem. Action flows smoothly and easy to follow story line. Write on.
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reply by the author on 08-May-2015
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The "almighty," or so it thinks, dollar bill. Lot of truth in this poem. Action flows smoothly and easy to follow story line. Write on.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-May-2015
reply by the author on 08-May-2015
As teen in 60' a song inspired this note, always cherish in heart song lyrics. I think we all, not only will but have, stole something for a dollar bill or a gain. Glad you found delight in this, note too. Thanking you for this generous rate and shout out to all poem readers. Hope it make their day, too.
