Bard's Awakening
Shadorma3 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Lifeless page
Became flourishing
With telling
Glossary
Fashioning into verses-
Poetry's alive
Your poem has a great presentation. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the notes about format. I see no changes. I like the message of your poem about making poetry come alive. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Lifeless page
Became flourishing
With telling
Glossary
Fashioning into verses-
Poetry's alive
Your poem has a great presentation. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for the notes about format. I see no changes. I like the message of your poem about making poetry come alive. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2015
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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jannypan, thank you very much for your visit and the encouraging comments.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This twelve-word poem has a nice rhythm flow for such a short poem. Nice clean, attractive illustration. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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This twelve-word poem has a nice rhythm flow for such a short poem. Nice clean, attractive illustration. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 06-May-2015
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Jeanie my friend, I thank you for the visit and the wonderful review and the good wishes, God bless.
Comment from w.j.debi
I like the concept of the blank lifeless page coming to life. The story lives because a bard gave the story life though a pen. What mysterious magic. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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I like the concept of the blank lifeless page coming to life. The story lives because a bard gave the story life though a pen. What mysterious magic. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Hello Debi, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review, glad you like the write, thank you very much.
