Letting go
Tanka contest entry34 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
If we can have "Self-Help books", I don't see why we can't have Self-Help poetry. Your piece rings true. We need to keep working at it each day, and we will get where we want to go. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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If we can have "Self-Help books", I don't see why we can't have Self-Help poetry. Your piece rings true. We need to keep working at it each day, and we will get where we want to go. Best wishes.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Hi Victor,
yes, we must strive to be the best version of ourselves as we possibly can be... and if words can achieve the thoughts to grow, then why not plant them?
Thank you for your fine review and comments, most appreciated.
With our thoughts we create,
our true potential,
James.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from ameen786
Aren't we all prisoners of our conscience? Indeed, one must release that resistance to reach the, "Silence of inner peace,"--which is the ultimate goal of mankind; A wonderful tanka; thanks for sharing and good luck!
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Aren't we all prisoners of our conscience? Indeed, one must release that resistance to reach the, "Silence of inner peace,"--which is the ultimate goal of mankind; A wonderful tanka; thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Hi Kamran,
unfortunately most of us are, but unnecessarily, as the things that hold us down or back are just a trapped or suppressed memories... the goal is to understand ourselves, motivations and intent... and with an authentic self assessment we can unlock our true potential to becoming the human being that we desire to become... that should be the goal.
Thank you for your very fine review and comments, most appreciated.
With our thoughts we create,
our true potential,
James.
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I fully appreciate sir, thank you very much.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I like your presentation. Good job with the syllable count, the artwork, the message and the color scheme.
I see no changes. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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I like your presentation. Good job with the syllable count, the artwork, the message and the color scheme.
I see no changes. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Hi Jannypan,
thank you for the fine review, comments and well wishes... all of which are truly appreciated.
With our thoughts we create,
our true potential,
James vx's
Comment from jmdg1954
You know what brother, you have impeccable timing. I posted a baseball blurb yesterday, felt good about it and was content. It came back from one of my biggest supporters riddled with mistakes. I mean totally embarrassing stuff. Errors I should not be making and I was ready to quit. I had my member dollars divided among three writers as a token of my appreciation as I rode off into the sunset. Close the book and squash the idiot writer. (Oh, by the by, you were one of the three!).
Then I read your post... But more so your authors notes, telling me I can't leave. And I remembered another tid-bit of yours I saved that I should look at more frequently-
Through positive thought
We create positive outcome.
If we think we can't
Then we never will.
Thanks brother. You didn't know it, but you saved me from leaving!
John
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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You know what brother, you have impeccable timing. I posted a baseball blurb yesterday, felt good about it and was content. It came back from one of my biggest supporters riddled with mistakes. I mean totally embarrassing stuff. Errors I should not be making and I was ready to quit. I had my member dollars divided among three writers as a token of my appreciation as I rode off into the sunset. Close the book and squash the idiot writer. (Oh, by the by, you were one of the three!).
Then I read your post... But more so your authors notes, telling me I can't leave. And I remembered another tid-bit of yours I saved that I should look at more frequently-
Through positive thought
We create positive outcome.
If we think we can't
Then we never will.
Thanks brother. You didn't know it, but you saved me from leaving!
John
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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Hi John,
take two... now I'm not going to go on like my first reply, it would only be an a reiteration of how and what I feel for your talent as a writer... and if a couple of my thoughts have eased your journey forward, then there could be no better compliment than helping my brother get back on track... no stars could ever be as of value to me more than the sentiment within your intent... you are all class... and I know for sure that you will keep plodding forward... that's who we are brother... guys that feel for real, and have a passion of sharing our thoughts.
Thank you so much for this compliment my friend and brother, your words mean everything... I will leave you with my first rule of life... Be kind to yourself... everything flows from there.
Be well, you are a star in this reader's eyes.
With our thoughts we create,
a path less cluttered,
James.
Comment from judiverse
This is a beautiful presentation. Your syllable count is right-on to meet the Tanka requirements. Self-love doesn't hurt. If you don't love yourself, you can't function or be of any use to anyone else. Your words are well chosen. Achieving inner peace is a good outcome. I don't think you need the hyphen between inner and peace. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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This is a beautiful presentation. Your syllable count is right-on to meet the Tanka requirements. Self-love doesn't hurt. If you don't love yourself, you can't function or be of any use to anyone else. Your words are well chosen. Achieving inner peace is a good outcome. I don't think you need the hyphen between inner and peace. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Hi Judiverse,
firstly, let me apologize for the delayed response to your wonderful review... it's been quite the week... I am truly thankful and appreciate the review, comments, suggestion, well wishes and rating... self love is definitely where the starting point is.
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's
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You're very welcome. No apologies needed. I have a hard time keeping up myself. judi
Comment from misscookie
I love the words that you wrote
They are so on point
Your author note made me smile, for It said almost said my very words while recovering from my stroke.
"I don't see myself as a person with a disability.
I see a person with lots of potently
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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I love the words that you wrote
They are so on point
Your author note made me smile, for It said almost said my very words while recovering from my stroke.
"I don't see myself as a person with a disability.
I see a person with lots of potently
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Hi Miss C,
firstly let me apologize for the delayed response to your wonderful review... some weeks just get away from ones grasp.
Don't know when you had your stroke, but hope you are recovering at a steady rate... and we both know attitude is a big part of any healing we have to undertake... but I can tell by I can tell by the strength in your words you have that part taken care of.
So, thank you for your beautiful words and personal comments... I am truly grateful... be well my friend.
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's
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Thank you for your kind concern and for those kind words. I had my stroke in 200o something?
I have to look in my journal to be sure. Some things I don't remember and dates and times are on top of my list. LoL
There is no need for that for there are other things to do in your life than F/S LOL
Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Kingsland
This ultra short poetic format has an excellent message line in its poetic throes. The thoughts here are worth remembering. This is just an outstanding piece of poetic art. I thoroughly enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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This ultra short poetic format has an excellent message line in its poetic throes. The thoughts here are worth remembering. This is just an outstanding piece of poetic art. I thoroughly enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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Hi John,
thank you for your thoughtful review and comments... the stars are a bonus on top of your sentiment... truly appreciated!
With our thoughts we create,
freedom through mindset,
James.
Comment from Nosha17
I agree, my stubbornness was never conducive to a happy life-since I am more relaxed and calm about things, my spiritual peace has increased dramatically. Well chosen words and a great message. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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I agree, my stubbornness was never conducive to a happy life-since I am more relaxed and calm about things, my spiritual peace has increased dramatically. Well chosen words and a great message. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Hi Faye,
firstly, let me apologize for the delayed response to your wonderful review... it has been quite the week.
being a Capricorn, I know this stubborn strait well... and no, it was never conducive to a positive outcome... so I'm happy for both of us that we have captured the essence of allowing ourselves to chill enough to bring in the positive.
Thank you so much for your review, rating, sharing comments and the well wishes... truly appreciated!
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's
Comment from Green Lake Girl
You're such a good soul, James, and it shows in everything you write. The challenges you've faced in life leave you uniquely qualified to write the kind of poem this is. So much positive energy and good old-fashioned advice in this short, powerful poem. Inner peace not only makes your life better, but also the lives of those around you. You are a living example. Excellently penned, my dear friend!
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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You're such a good soul, James, and it shows in everything you write. The challenges you've faced in life leave you uniquely qualified to write the kind of poem this is. So much positive energy and good old-fashioned advice in this short, powerful poem. Inner peace not only makes your life better, but also the lives of those around you. You are a living example. Excellently penned, my dear friend!
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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Hi Marietta,
thank you for knowing my authentic soul... life is such an enlightening journey... we never really know where, when or how our experiences will change the direction of our intention... we can only keep plodding forward in the knowledge of... 'I am striving to be the best possible version of myself that I can be under any circumstance'.
You have a warm heart and a sharp mind... my admiration and respect... class can not be acted out, only acted within.
thank you for this very uplifting review, complimented with grace through words... the exceptional rating is magic, but the words and sentiment are gold!
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's
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You're so very welcome, James. Your writing has advanced to another level--it's a pleasure to read anything from your keyboard lately. You write from the heart and it shows.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A good tanka in good tanka form - 5/7/5/7/7 syllables all correct. Good use of alliteration in your first line. A good poem about meditation and reading your author notes it is lovely to be told by practising it we can reach our true potential. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothyx
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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A good tanka in good tanka form - 5/7/5/7/7 syllables all correct. Good use of alliteration in your first line. A good poem about meditation and reading your author notes it is lovely to be told by practising it we can reach our true potential. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothyx
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Hi Dorothy,
firstly, let me apologize for the delayed response to your lovely review... it has been one of those weeks, if you what I mean?
So, thank you for this review, your comments and well wishes... all which are truly appreciated.
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's
