Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is an extremely intersting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is a dark and brooding tale of cancer growing and killing the host. This is striking. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015

cancer was used....as metaphore....this a true tale Job witnessed .....human whoring worthless,and written in moments wisdom whorth while...-smile-...thanks Tom, I met some people once who helped change me...-smile-...my thoughts...beliefs core...taught me ...told me once she did....when asked sitting on floor head on her knee....watching "Ann Frank's diary"....do you believe people are all basicicaly "good" at heart.........with hesitation....she told the truth...probably the first time i'd heard it.....-smile-...I know you dont understand...but God does...I assure you....love Bug-

reply by Tomes Johnston on 29-Apr-2015

Well done

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I like the personification of weed being evil (satan). You make some strong and powerful statements in this Michael. Well done.

Teresa

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015

Hi Teresa...-smile- thank you sweet Lady...much appreciated...love-

Comment from thee-name

Excellent

Excellent poem. I enjoyed reading this writing.

evil seeds itself . . .
cancerous
666 famous worships times stolen moment

suggestion: put this writing in the horror category.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015

Hi...-smile-...ahh I don't categorize...its just life general. Thanks man...love-

reply by thee-name on 25-Jun-2015

thank you!

Comment from Phoenix8

Excellent

I loved the haunting dark tone of the poem. You certainly have a way with words, this poem has a beautiful and poetic flow. My favorite phrase was 'orchards of ruin'

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015

Smile-....thank you very much....love Michael

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

Well 666 is the sign of the devil, more of his misbegotten son who will be the Anti-Christ. So it has been said in the movie Omen and the Bible. the evil one is near.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015

Hey Alan....yes...they're all around us...good and evil...and then there are those who say they represent New Testament Jesus who cannibalize even their own behind curtains shame. I stick with the Bible...it is its own omen. -smile- thank you sir...love Michael

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

666...the Mark of the Beast... as foretold in the Biblical Book of Revelations.
This is a compelling write, Michael. It's rife with compelling imagery and subliminally dark undertones. Evil chokes the life out of nearly everything it manages to gain a grasp of.

Great alliteration with "through three too easiily" (easily,) and "faux fleece".

A valiant effort and very thought provoking piece of poetic expressionism.

1 Peter 5:8
8- Be sober, be vigilant; because your adversary the devil, as a roaring lion, walketh about, seeking whom he may devour:

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015

Hey Dean...-smile- thank you sir....appreciate you taking the time...love michael

reply by Dean Kuch on 15-Jun-2015

Yes sir. You're more than welcome. :}

Comment from Thamp

Excellent

Thank you for making me stop and feel. Frankly, I'd rather laugh, but it is also good to exercise my other emotions. I'm not sure what my feelings were but much less than a laugh.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

Hey Thamp...-smile- ah well...who wouldn't...? -smile-....this poems originator has experienced evil in its finest hour, dressed to kill....and this is his lesson...-wink- thank you man...love-

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

Wow what an excellent total package which we have here, I love the poetry and the video makes it all the better. Well done my friend with this excellent work here.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015

Hello Chris...-smile- I thank you kindly sir...love-

Comment from misscookie

Exceptional

Wow!
This is very deep. You captured my attention when I looked at the photo one could she had something serious on her mind.
The song is a perfect match.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015

wow is right...-smile- thank you good Lady for the unexpected blessing...love michael

reply by misscookie on 28-Apr-2015

You're very welcome, take care and have a blessed day.
Cookie

Comment from petalangela

Excellent

Satanic worship is quite rife and the sign of the beast slowly becomes ready for the bill boards brainwashing all who have not found their way to Christ. Drugs and weed cloud the mind and the beast begins to feast

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015

yea that's what some churches teach.....in each and every destructive breath....preaching better than thou whom suffer
blessed in evil's ignorant bliss......well they can kiss my Irish ass...-wink-...bug the bigger love its what I do....Michael