Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 231 "Climb"Small and Specialty Poems
7 total reviews
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Very interesting. You, more than any other poet on this site, go out of your way to embrace new poetry formats. I love the history behind this style.
Good message, Tom: Grab for the knot!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Very interesting. You, more than any other poet on this site, go out of your way to embrace new poetry formats. I love the history behind this style.
Good message, Tom: Grab for the knot!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thank you. Yes, i do too.
Comment from risktaker
Excellent photo and message. The word choice and imagery is on point and fantastic. The imagery is empowering and motivating. Great job!!!! Home run.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Excellent photo and message. The word choice and imagery is on point and fantastic. The imagery is empowering and motivating. Great job!!!! Home run.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thank you risktaker. Did you intend to rank it a 4 then?
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no i made a mistake. i will change it.
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Thank you, i appreciate that very much.
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ok
Comment from rod007
A new format--short but to the point. Climbing upwards before you fall off the rope. A positive poem that gives one hope that not all is lost in the midst of calamity and desperation. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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A new format--short but to the point. Climbing upwards before you fall off the rope. A positive poem that gives one hope that not all is lost in the midst of calamity and desperation. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thank you rod.
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks you sharing another form you discovered. I thought at first the picture referred to the old expression, "Give a man enough rope to hang himself," but I was soon disabused of that thought and picked up the more inspirational meaning! Indeed, it does take fortitude to climb out of a bad situation. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thanks you sharing another form you discovered. I thought at first the picture referred to the old expression, "Give a man enough rope to hang himself," but I was soon disabused of that thought and picked up the more inspirational meaning! Indeed, it does take fortitude to climb out of a bad situation. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thank you Joan, so true. Many uses for a rope. Lol.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Another one of your excellent ways to write poetry Mr T. Always amazes me that you come up with some of the most weirdest things on how to write..Not that it is bad just weird lol
TK
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Another one of your excellent ways to write poetry Mr T. Always amazes me that you come up with some of the most weirdest things on how to write..Not that it is bad just weird lol
TK
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thank you. Sir T.
Comment from patcelaw
This is an interesting format. I can see why it would be such a popular format with the women of Afghanistan as they are short and easily memorized. It is fun to see you trying ne formats. I hope you find it as mind stretching as I find trying new formats. Patricia
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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This is an interesting format. I can see why it would be such a popular format with the women of Afghanistan as they are short and easily memorized. It is fun to see you trying ne formats. I hope you find it as mind stretching as I find trying new formats. Patricia
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thank you Patricia. I do. I helps keep the brain active and young.
Comment from tfawcus
You certainly find some interesting poetic forms, Tom. The background notes to this one are fascinating. One sometimes forgets what a powerful vehicle poetry can be to keep the human spirit alive in oppressive circumstances. I like the lightness of your poem. One can almost see the fatalistic shrug of the shoulders accompanying the 'Oh my' and the 'OK'.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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You certainly find some interesting poetic forms, Tom. The background notes to this one are fascinating. One sometimes forgets what a powerful vehicle poetry can be to keep the human spirit alive in oppressive circumstances. I like the lightness of your poem. One can almost see the fatalistic shrug of the shoulders accompanying the 'Oh my' and the 'OK'.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thank you tony. Thats a wonderful review.
