Little Poems
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Comment from royowen
Well I loved your calligram! I've learned something new for this day, I love being on FS I learn something everyday, the picture is quite obviously a bi-plane, there lots of them when I was young, they called them Tiger moths than, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Well I loved your calligram! I've learned something new for this day, I love being on FS I learn something everyday, the picture is quite obviously a bi-plane, there lots of them when I was young, they called them Tiger moths than, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Thank you Roy. I like that about the site too.
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Yep.
Comment from krys123
Treishel;
+ A very impressive Calligram was I not only truly enjoyed and thought impressive but definitely entertained as well.
+ This by excellent means is a good example of enjambment which is the running on of a thought and concepts in one stanza in line to the next without a syntactical break.
+ Also good use of juxtaposition technique of association, where it is the use of two distinct images and one stanza all poem. Theories association of flying and high. And this is not only what you use, because in your Calligram, there are complete number of associations being used.
+ The imagery is self explanatory and is truly distinct, clear and phenomenally expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive throughout the whole poem and picture.
+ Your resourceful imagination is truly inventive and ingeniously creative throughout it's writing and it's production and composition.
+ Thank you so kindly my friend for sharing and posting this great poem for everyone to read and see and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Treishel;
+ A very impressive Calligram was I not only truly enjoyed and thought impressive but definitely entertained as well.
+ This by excellent means is a good example of enjambment which is the running on of a thought and concepts in one stanza in line to the next without a syntactical break.
+ Also good use of juxtaposition technique of association, where it is the use of two distinct images and one stanza all poem. Theories association of flying and high. And this is not only what you use, because in your Calligram, there are complete number of associations being used.
+ The imagery is self explanatory and is truly distinct, clear and phenomenally expressive and vividly and demonstratively descriptive throughout the whole poem and picture.
+ Your resourceful imagination is truly inventive and ingeniously creative throughout it's writing and it's production and composition.
+ Thank you so kindly my friend for sharing and posting this great poem for everyone to read and see and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Wow, that was a most impressive review in its own. I appreciate that you took the time to really analyse MIT.
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Again you are so sincerely welcome my friend.
Alex
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Very neat Mr T. Always coming up with something new to feed our minds as well as our visual views..Another fin job I say Very fine indeed...
TK
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Very neat Mr T. Always coming up with something new to feed our minds as well as our visual views..Another fin job I say Very fine indeed...
TK
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Thank you Sir T. You got you unicorn and now I can be Snoppy.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Trieschel, what an absolutely brilliant calligram, I have never heard of these before, but don't they do well my friend, excellent!
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Hi Trieschel, what an absolutely brilliant calligram, I have never heard of these before, but don't they do well my friend, excellent!
n
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Thank you Eric.
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You are welcome my friend
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is great. I love the image. Yes, it looks like a bi-plane. Yes, I know about them. Your little poem below is quite good.
I see no changes.
Good job. I can see a contest sprouting up with this format of calligram.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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This is great. I love the image. Yes, it looks like a bi-plane. Yes, I know about them. Your little poem below is quite good.
I see no changes.
Good job. I can see a contest sprouting up with this format of calligram.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Thank you jannypan. I'm not a fan of the contests.
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I have read several of your poems. They are all deep and very meaningful. As for the contest, I thought someone else may sponsor one with this idea.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow. I don't think many people agree with that. Well, unless they get high before they get on the plane because they are afraid of flying! You do a wonderful job of showing your love of flying. This was terrific.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Wow. I don't think many people agree with that. Well, unless they get high before they get on the plane because they are afraid of flying! You do a wonderful job of showing your love of flying. This was terrific.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Ethanol you Michael.
