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Comment from Healing
Such an awesome poem. A great read with such a distinct flow.
Full of fantastic imagery. Very interesting read for sure
Well done. Thank you so much for sharing your talent
Ky
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Such an awesome poem. A great read with such a distinct flow.
Full of fantastic imagery. Very interesting read for sure
Well done. Thank you so much for sharing your talent
Ky
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you...smile
Comment from Bryana
Well my friend, this was a fun piece to read, I read it
twice and found something different the second time.
English is my second language and when I read poetry
like yours, I learn something.
Excellent poem from an excellent poet.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Well my friend, this was a fun piece to read, I read it
twice and found something different the second time.
English is my second language and when I read poetry
like yours, I learn something.
Excellent poem from an excellent poet.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you ...-smile-
Comment from Donovan
I always like when people are not ashamed and espoused their beliefs. Truth indeed reflects on our senses and regardless of individual conviction, truth never alters. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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I always like when people are not ashamed and espoused their beliefs. Truth indeed reflects on our senses and regardless of individual conviction, truth never alters. Nicely done.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you...smile-
Comment from amada
This is a very provoking piece, Michael. You are the best of your poetry talent. A you write so well..."forever feel my poetry." I wish you the best.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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This is a very provoking piece, Michael. You are the best of your poetry talent. A you write so well..."forever feel my poetry." I wish you the best.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Hi sweetheart....-smile- hope you're well...love michael
Comment from NicciFaye
This is you my dear. You tell those that don't understand whose and whom side your for and that you won't change for no one! The evil competition don't stand a chance with your sledgehammer of God's words wrap in your gift to the world. Only those that can read between the lines will understand. Those that may read the bible every now and again...
preach your truth legion
archangel's worst enemy
the names Michael...sledgehammer swings last right
now you know me...
If you weren't on God's side
you might just tell the world F**** you
but instead you say F***you
as in Faith you because you have
faith in you...
you God-sided man ;-)
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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This is you my dear. You tell those that don't understand whose and whom side your for and that you won't change for no one! The evil competition don't stand a chance with your sledgehammer of God's words wrap in your gift to the world. Only those that can read between the lines will understand. Those that may read the bible every now and again...
preach your truth legion
archangel's worst enemy
the names Michael...sledgehammer swings last right
now you know me...
If you weren't on God's side
you might just tell the world F**** you
but instead you say F***you
as in Faith you because you have
faith in you...
you God-sided man ;-)
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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you don't know how much this means to me....I was so worried ahh confused that "they" would go on unjudged.....but I see now Who's side God is on.....never mind....I am relieved that they are the lie not Him. love you michael
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;-) I know what it feels like to put your best work before the court of idol 'gods' and men...
Comment from danpald
The dark does seem to be your theme
Each poem does like such wanderings
The realm of evil meeting grace
The nod toward the earlier fate
Still the poem does only seem black
Written with names that modes of the light
Hope is found even in strife
So the poem turns on the battle of life
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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The dark does seem to be your theme
Each poem does like such wanderings
The realm of evil meeting grace
The nod toward the earlier fate
Still the poem does only seem black
Written with names that modes of the light
Hope is found even in strife
So the poem turns on the battle of life
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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amen....and life wins for us whom I righteous in our sin.....in so much....we recognize and correct, if possible....death never does this....it is incapable. love michael
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"God Sided", is an exceptionally well-written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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"God Sided", is an exceptionally well-written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you....smile-
reconciled, you're more than welcome
....smile... the Duchess
Comment from Heidixoxo
Hello my dear friend,
This immediately caught my attention for a couple of different reasons. The first being that you have always been one of my favorite poets!! This proved my theory very well once again. I really like your style of writing and this one was excellent. I will recommend this to others to read. Job well done and I wish you nothing but the best....xoxo
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Hello my dear friend,
This immediately caught my attention for a couple of different reasons. The first being that you have always been one of my favorite poets!! This proved my theory very well once again. I really like your style of writing and this one was excellent. I will recommend this to others to read. Job well done and I wish you nothing but the best....xoxo
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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-smile-...well thank you....I'm proud to be called poet. ...and ill punch anybody who laughs at me...I have...-wink-...smile-...thank you friend...I'm no studied ahh "poet"....I don't think there are...I think we study those whom were given the gift.....thank you....love michael
Comment from nomi338
The battle between good and evil, righteousness and sin continues unabated. man's fate sits inside a trophy case to be awarded to the eventual winner. This long running battle, begun in the Garden of Eden has had many chapters. There have been some casualties, some winners and some losers. The burning question for all of us is on which side will you end up being on. Should that even be a question? Should that not be a no brainer? I don't know do you?
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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The battle between good and evil, righteousness and sin continues unabated. man's fate sits inside a trophy case to be awarded to the eventual winner. This long running battle, begun in the Garden of Eden has had many chapters. There have been some casualties, some winners and some losers. The burning question for all of us is on which side will you end up being on. Should that even be a question? Should that not be a no brainer? I don't know do you?
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 15-May-2015
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Hi ya...-smile-....yes maam....I was worried.....but I've spent some time seeing.....I always said...first I would prove then wrong....and I have. then I would find my truth....what God says is real....believe it. love Michael
Comment from petalangela
Hmm they talk about poetic justice in a factious way your post personifies justice in a poetic way.
They day will arrive for the great sort out I sit and I . Will anyone truly be ready for it,
The Christians say they will but they too a failing to meet the criteria in many ways and will feel the sledgehammer.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Hmm they talk about poetic justice in a factious way your post personifies justice in a poetic way.
They day will arrive for the great sort out I sit and I . Will anyone truly be ready for it,
The Christians say they will but they too a failing to meet the criteria in many ways and will feel the sledgehammer.
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you....smile-
