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I am what I am,my thoughts, my words,my poems

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Comment from danpald
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The need of discipline these days
That is swift without delay
That moves the one to better tasks
That is a very good epitaph

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

Should that read 'Bill' in the title, rather than 'Bll'?

I am assuming you are not using 'bugger' in its literal sense! lol

Of course, these days he'd be arrested physical abuse for booting the backside!

Witty and fun
Good luck
GMG

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
    thnx i had better correct it, it was supposed to be an anonymos entry in a competition, no- one was supposed to know I wrote it, don't know how that came about