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Comment from
danpald
The need of discipline these days
That is swift without delay
That moves the one to better tasks
That is a very good epitaph
Comment Written 20-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
Thanks for your kind review
Comment from
giraffmang
Hi there,
Should that read 'Bill' in the title, rather than 'Bll'?
I am assuming you are not using 'bugger' in its literal sense! lol
Of course, these days he'd be arrested physical abuse for booting the backside!
Witty and fun
Good luck
GMG
Comment Written 20-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
thnx i had better correct it, it was supposed to be an anonymos entry in a competition, no- one was supposed to know I wrote it, don't know how that came about
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