Jesus died on the cross.
A religious Acrostic.26 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Ine - a thoughtful free verse bringing to our attention the death of Jesus and how he died for our sins. Certainly church seems to be the place where our prayers are carried out, but as you say not everyone goes to church. We can pray wherever we are - no need to go to church. Warm regards Dorothyx
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Hi Ine - a thoughtful free verse bringing to our attention the death of Jesus and how he died for our sins. Certainly church seems to be the place where our prayers are carried out, but as you say not everyone goes to church. We can pray wherever we are - no need to go to church. Warm regards Dorothyx
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from misscookie
You had my attention from the first line to the last.
Your words touched my heart and soul. No matter how many time this certain poem is written, it warms my heart and soul.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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You had my attention from the first line to the last.
Your words touched my heart and soul. No matter how many time this certain poem is written, it warms my heart and soul.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Thanks for your kind review.
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You're very welcome, until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Brett Matthew West
I see potential in this but you may want to rework parts of it. Hard for me to Review a religious writing and not give it 5-Stars but that is how I see this one. Some of the lines look choppy. Message is very good and easy to understand. Write on.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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I see potential in this but you may want to rework parts of it. Hard for me to Review a religious writing and not give it 5-Stars but that is how I see this one. Some of the lines look choppy. Message is very good and easy to understand. Write on.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Bill Schott
I was halfway through this poem before realizing it was an acrostic. It caught at a good time as I was enjoying the sunrise. Nice poem.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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I was halfway through this poem before realizing it was an acrostic. It caught at a good time as I was enjoying the sunrise. Nice poem.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Ine. I love it mate, what a great little poem this is that says so much. I pray all of the time, I never forget to ask or thank because I would have died as a kid without Him. He has blessed me in so many ways. I watched the "passion of the Christ" movie with Delia for the first time that we had seen it a couple of weeks ago and that showed just how painful His death was, very disturbing. This is a great dedication you have written my friend. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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G'day Ine. I love it mate, what a great little poem this is that says so much. I pray all of the time, I never forget to ask or thank because I would have died as a kid without Him. He has blessed me in so many ways. I watched the "passion of the Christ" movie with Delia for the first time that we had seen it a couple of weeks ago and that showed just how painful His death was, very disturbing. This is a great dedication you have written my friend. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. I pray daily as well, but in general the churches get empty. Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Thanks for the great six, Fez.
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always welcome mate.
Comment from benoenose
The ecclesiastical critical questioned is laid before, if the church has with no JESUS. Specifically the author truly believes on the cross and no other place. Therefore the God who takes away the sin is Jesus.
Both theological and ecclesiastical elements are found with salvation history echoes, widely read by those in spirituality.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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The ecclesiastical critical questioned is laid before, if the church has with no JESUS. Specifically the author truly believes on the cross and no other place. Therefore the God who takes away the sin is Jesus.
Both theological and ecclesiastical elements are found with salvation history echoes, widely read by those in spirituality.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Thanks for your kind review. I vary a bit in what I think. Thanks for the lovely six.
