Little Poems
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Gosh, how long did it take you to do that? It's amazing, Tom. Really clever, you wrote a poem out of your words, I can only give you my complete admiration. Job very well done. And, I loved the little 'ditty', LOL! Well done my friend. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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Gosh, how long did it take you to do that? It's amazing, Tom. Really clever, you wrote a poem out of your words, I can only give you my complete admiration. Job very well done. And, I loved the little 'ditty', LOL! Well done my friend. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 11-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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Thank you Sandra. It took about 3 hours.
Comment from Pantygynt
Intriguing but I don't think I'll be trying it. Not really my scene but I warrant you it is clever. It's similar to what I would call 'concrete poetry but this one takes that idea one step beyound.
That is what I said last time around and see no reason in altering it now. If I remember rightly it sparked off a rash of poetic bicycles and aeroplanes act. Fun stuff.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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Intriguing but I don't think I'll be trying it. Not really my scene but I warrant you it is clever. It's similar to what I would call 'concrete poetry but this one takes that idea one step beyound.
That is what I said last time around and see no reason in altering it now. If I remember rightly it sparked off a rash of poetic bicycles and aeroplanes act. Fun stuff.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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Thanks Pantygynt. I may try another one in about a week. It was fun to do. Need a concept though. Yup, it it is a subcategory of concrete.
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Thought so.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Tom - you nipping into the brandy this afternoon.LOL Ok I see the outline of the car, and your comical piece made me laugh...a ham indeed. Reminds me of Fred Flinstone!
Nicely penned format - new one to me:)
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
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Dear Tom - you nipping into the brandy this afternoon.LOL Ok I see the outline of the car, and your comical piece made me laugh...a ham indeed. Reminds me of Fred Flinstone!
Nicely penned format - new one to me:)
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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Thank you Naureen. No, but I will be soon. Peach Brandy to be exact. Paul Masson's.
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Oh - a tasty one!
Cheers
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Ok Mr T this one if I read it back wards does the car go in the same direction? hehehe Yep I am in my wise ass mode this morning for sure..Really I like it and is quite ingenious..
tk
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Ok Mr T this one if I read it back wards does the car go in the same direction? hehehe Yep I am in my wise ass mode this morning for sure..Really I like it and is quite ingenious..
tk
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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Thank you Sir T. Nope, it would just back up.
