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Comment from livelylinda
Michael: moody today . . . I love the feel that this poem flowed over me. Like chocolate, perhaps, or maybe a waterfall shower. It is brilliant, as per usual gushing from your mind, on the inside of you. Thank you. Soft Thunder
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Michael: moody today . . . I love the feel that this poem flowed over me. Like chocolate, perhaps, or maybe a waterfall shower. It is brilliant, as per usual gushing from your mind, on the inside of you. Thank you. Soft Thunder
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Hey Thunder...-smile-...yea, I suppose I'm whatcha call bi-polar gone crazy....so when the gets too bright ...i lock myself away like a lonely lon chainy......belalagosing ghost's of by-gone day....lol...love you Bug-
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Michael - this one has me reading it over and over. Plus "Watermark" I've been listening to just as much. Something here, about the quality of space in that "home alone" waiting - The single spinning of a dance in those moments of awe, the last goodbye, or the last breath, or perhaps the shift in perception of what life and death is:) Wonderful thought provoking piece to read this morning.
Thanks for sharing,
Mo
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Dear Michael - this one has me reading it over and over. Plus "Watermark" I've been listening to just as much. Something here, about the quality of space in that "home alone" waiting - The single spinning of a dance in those moments of awe, the last goodbye, or the last breath, or perhaps the shift in perception of what life and death is:) Wonderful thought provoking piece to read this morning.
Thanks for sharing,
Mo
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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hm hmm...yea -headshake-...yep...-smile-...me too...-wink-...last goodbye....breath....-headtilt-...ahhhhh.....nope....-headshake-...not in there....Morean. Love your bug-
Comment from jlsavell
Good morning Michael,
Dallas is crisp and cool. As always I am up very early sitting on the porch atop a hill watching the Dallas skyline become more pronounced against the sunrise.
Your poem, is simply, elegantly and eloquently stated. Exquisite in presentation and introspective in heart and soul.
The question seems to spill from the deepest chambers of the narrator's heart.
It's speaks of something gone but not forgotten and a wishful hope that what or who is gone is truly not in mind or spirit.
Truly, love never dies. That is an intense love could never dissipate no matter how intense or damaging or destructive the breakup.
One might want the memories to go away for the pain is too great but they will be the albatross one takes to his or her grave.
I am sure the narrator's subject feels just as intensely as the narrator.
The question to the subject.. do you worship our time suspended is quite a telling and remarkable line.
A chance percentage against all odds speaks of the difficult obstacles which separate the two and coming back together could be chance if not bleak.
The narrator knows that this love cannot pretend it hates or doesn't feel. Every breath speaks otherwise.
Such an exceptional 4 dimensional work of art. Appealing to all senses of the reader from the spiritual to the emotional. Highly charged and emotive.
A new Poem of the Month.
bugthelovewithawinkandasmileacrossthemileswherethinkingofyouwillnevercease
Jimi
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Good morning Michael,
Dallas is crisp and cool. As always I am up very early sitting on the porch atop a hill watching the Dallas skyline become more pronounced against the sunrise.
Your poem, is simply, elegantly and eloquently stated. Exquisite in presentation and introspective in heart and soul.
The question seems to spill from the deepest chambers of the narrator's heart.
It's speaks of something gone but not forgotten and a wishful hope that what or who is gone is truly not in mind or spirit.
Truly, love never dies. That is an intense love could never dissipate no matter how intense or damaging or destructive the breakup.
One might want the memories to go away for the pain is too great but they will be the albatross one takes to his or her grave.
I am sure the narrator's subject feels just as intensely as the narrator.
The question to the subject.. do you worship our time suspended is quite a telling and remarkable line.
A chance percentage against all odds speaks of the difficult obstacles which separate the two and coming back together could be chance if not bleak.
The narrator knows that this love cannot pretend it hates or doesn't feel. Every breath speaks otherwise.
Such an exceptional 4 dimensional work of art. Appealing to all senses of the reader from the spiritual to the emotional. Highly charged and emotive.
A new Poem of the Month.
bugthelovewithawinkandasmileacrossthemileswherethinkingofyouwillnevercease
Jimi
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Hi Sunshine....-smile- ...well Dallas is blessed this morning. Sounds like your settling well and rising a new. I think of you often....-smile-...thank you. ha ha poem of the month...I think i got one vote...-wink- love michael
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you know my Uncle Bernie and my Latin teacher of 3 years use to call me sunshine. I am up in the comp room while Lee and his grandparents are trying to decide where we go for dinner, then Lee and I are off to a movie.
well guess who gave you that vote.. moi!!!
Hang in there, you'll get more.. Where is Linda's vote? Besides it is more popularity than anything, you know that.. Yeah, I hear you, I breathe you often..
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it was you....-smile-
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yes.. no secret..
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but this work now is far and above exceptional. It is incredible. I am sure Linda loved it, oh no I know she did. It reminded me of all those poems I found in a big big pile!
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-smile-...stay away from the red meat...-smile-......turkey, chicken....that stuffs like sugar for you....you'll have people climbing the walls....-smile-...have fun Jimi.
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an attempt at humor.......its complicated...-handtwirl...ahhh when its not funny....What I meant to say was have a great time...love-
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huh????
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nothing sweetheart...have a great time tonight...-smile-
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I am trying to have a good time. Enjoying family but there is one man that I can't get out of my thoughts. I just wanted him here with me, beside me always. That is family. Ahh but it's not meant to be and I can't help but feel a huge part of me is missing.
Comment from benoenose
The poet remembers a solitude pain that he underwent, and thus recollects the mood that contributed. But now only her name stands and thus the poet seeks relief.
Lingering poem with stylish explanation and rhythm, recommended for the lonely in heart to see solace within the poem. Though captured with the feelings that the poet realizes, nobody can reach her, but I meditate on you and remember the memories that are in shades.
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The poet remembers a solitude pain that he underwent, and thus recollects the mood that contributed. But now only her name stands and thus the poet seeks relief.
Lingering poem with stylish explanation and rhythm, recommended for the lonely in heart to see solace within the poem. Though captured with the feelings that the poet realizes, nobody can reach her, but I meditate on you and remember the memories that are in shades.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Every poet remembers well....and believes all is in reach.... Or his world of words is wieghtless. Smile ...I thank you for enjoying. Love bug
Comment from CR Delport
The time we get to spend with people are so precious, but we don't always realize that until they are gone. This very well written.
Take care.
Christelle.
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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The time we get to spend with people are so precious, but we don't always realize that until they are gone. This very well written.
Take care.
Christelle.
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Hey Christelle...-smile- thank you sweet Lady....yes...that is true. have a great night....love Bug-
Comment from Joan E.
You always adorn your words with remarkable pictures. I found the "will you ever say goodbye" very poignant, and I liked the circularity in this poem as well. Cheers- Joan
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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You always adorn your words with remarkable pictures. I found the "will you ever say goodbye" very poignant, and I liked the circularity in this poem as well. Cheers- Joan
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Hi j ....smile....thank you gorgeous ....I love that you read me.hope your having a fantastic night Love bug
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I try not to miss your work, even when traveling. We are having a mini-vacation about 10 miles from Los Angeles. We bought art on our last cruise, and the auction house is putting us up at a hotel in Marina del Rey for an event with three artists and lots of artworks. Hopefully, we'll resist temptation and just enjoy the art, views and good food! Happy weekend to you when it arrives- Joan
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Jesus J...I know how to draw...-headtlt-...what are you guys doing in the desert....look I'm gonna throw together a lil' gallery....I want you come take a look...I'll make egg salad...-wink-....lol...have fun-
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If you were closer, I'd come to your gallery in a heartbeat! If wish they had only egg salad--I'm going to gain three pounds!! But the art is terrific--with watched Alfred Gockel paint on canvas from scratch and today Peter Max arrives. I'll keep you posted if anything stupendous happens. Hugs and happy weekend- Joan
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every time you smile...stupendous awe inspires....-wink- ...alright stay away from the Rembrants....leave Bob some pocket change...ahhh haha
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They actually just had a Rembrant etching up--don't worry, we didn't bid on it! I am so pleased you are on the receiving end of my smiles!! Big, bright ones are coming your way-- ; ) Joan
Comment from l.raven
yes she says...I am home...twirl by words spoken...cherish time priceless...feelings felt...not to say goodbye...why??? ...home cozy...wrapped warm she says...within you...home...love you Michael...beautiful picture...wonderful music...love Linda xxoo
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yes she says...I am home...twirl by words spoken...cherish time priceless...feelings felt...not to say goodbye...why??? ...home cozy...wrapped warm she says...within you...home...love you Michael...beautiful picture...wonderful music...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Hello full of Beauty....she who breathes amazing grace....elegant as the perfect day...-smile- thank you Dear....love Michael
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always so welcome baby...love this review...smiling big...thank you!!! relax...smile...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from His Grayness
Really masterful work here Michael! This is a beautifully flowing and smooth write with a truly powerful emotional grip! Great job and congratulations! Vance
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Really masterful work here Michael! This is a beautifully flowing and smooth write with a truly powerful emotional grip! Great job and congratulations! Vance
Comment Written 07-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Hey Vance....-smile- ah thanks....hope you're well Sir.....appreciate you taking the time....love Bug-
