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Comment from Dom G Robles
I find it a little difficult to decipher this poem. There could be several interpretations to this poem, I believe. But because of its tone which others may consider it as keen and sharp, I'm a little lost. But let me try. Something important (a ticket) caused a heart attack, first line. The second line shifted to something the writer is not familiar--the Atlantis. Unless the receiver is not a wide reader, he gets lost. The last line is like or almost a repeat to the first.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2015
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I find it a little difficult to decipher this poem. There could be several interpretations to this poem, I believe. But because of its tone which others may consider it as keen and sharp, I'm a little lost. But let me try. Something important (a ticket) caused a heart attack, first line. The second line shifted to something the writer is not familiar--the Atlantis. Unless the receiver is not a wide reader, he gets lost. The last line is like or almost a repeat to the first.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2015
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Wei the decipher ring is usually found at the bottom of the cereal box.im hopeful you'll get it yet Dom.good luck and God speed . Love bug
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Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
The video does enhance the understanding of the glimpses of emotion and connection to sudden loss and its reflection on the immensity of effect. Your reduction to emotion and image is well synthetized.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2015
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The video does enhance the understanding of the glimpses of emotion and connection to sudden loss and its reflection on the immensity of effect. Your reduction to emotion and image is well synthetized.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2015
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Hey bill ....smile ....thank you sir glad you enjoyed it. Love bug
Comment from MoonMuse
Great job as always. "love what we hate and innate procreates" - that line sticks with me for some reason. Engaging and beautiful. Thanks for the post! Cheers, MM
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2015
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Great job as always. "love what we hate and innate procreates" - that line sticks with me for some reason. Engaging and beautiful. Thanks for the post! Cheers, MM
Comment Written 06-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2015
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Hey Lt.Dan....how are ya Sir....you ready to go into the shrimping buisness with me...-smile- ahh thank you man...happy you enjoyed it....love Bug-
Comment from robina1978
Nice photo that complements your poem perfectly: two people looking away from each other. Love and hate. And then a sudden heart attack. This free verse sounded great.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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Nice photo that complements your poem perfectly: two people looking away from each other. Love and hate. And then a sudden heart attack. This free verse sounded great.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2015
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Hey you....-smile- thank you so much...love michael
Comment from TOMORAL
Wow, I didn't understand the words until I saw the stunning video. What a beautiful song to accompany this fine piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing it. The music was just lovely, and now that I read the poem again. it breaks my heart. Great writing, poet.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2015
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Wow, I didn't understand the words until I saw the stunning video. What a beautiful song to accompany this fine piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing it. The music was just lovely, and now that I read the poem again. it breaks my heart. Great writing, poet.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2015
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Well alright...look at that...Amen...yes the video struck me as well....appreciate sharing the ride with ya...-wink- love Bug-
Comment from ameen786
Although, listed in general category, I found this to be a deep philosophical verse and I admit that I am not sure if I fully grasp the theme.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Although, listed in general category, I found this to be a deep philosophical verse and I admit that I am not sure if I fully grasp the theme.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hello Ameen....-smile- Condition...I think it was about the human condition....that's where my background was stilted...so its a good guess. I'm wondering if I'm still harboring resentment. A subconscious ghost haunting perhaps. I chant the just let go slogan as a religious zealot marches on....even attending people are not all evil anonymous twice a week...but there are still times, you know what I mean...? Anyway...thanks man....love Michael
Comment from DictionaryGirl
What a haunting picture you chose. Great poem though I really enjoyed reading this and would like to read more of your work in the future.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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What a haunting picture you chose. Great poem though I really enjoyed reading this and would like to read more of your work in the future.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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Hi...-smile-...well I thank you...I believe you've made the right choice...not only am I a renowned fanstorian...but I also do murals...and am considering branching out into the Country music jandra ...so -wink- how can you go wrong. Love Bug-
Comment from l.raven
Hi Baby, I don't think it's so much hate in anger...as it is two heads just hitting...we hate what we love...love what we hate...even for all we fought...when push came to shove...I would have given Bobby whatever it took to get him to live...it was just his time...this is so beautifully written...with so much feeling...only your words could have said it said nicely...and as you know...the video has a special meaning...love you Michael...Linda xxoo
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Hi Baby, I don't think it's so much hate in anger...as it is two heads just hitting...we hate what we love...love what we hate...even for all we fought...when push came to shove...I would have given Bobby whatever it took to get him to live...it was just his time...this is so beautifully written...with so much feeling...only your words could have said it said nicely...and as you know...the video has a special meaning...love you Michael...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 05-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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I know...that's the best part of the story...and moral for us all...your conversation with God, how earnestly you sacrificed your strength of being in ransom for what you had....I suppose its what kept you going...knowing...not only Gods witness...but your own...knowing. -smile-...you're good...deep soul you're good. love Michael
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thank you so much for your kind words Michael...priceless they are...you so touch my soul...smiling so big...love you back...Linda xxoo
Comment from Joan E.
Your artwork selection reminded me of the skinny models being boycotted in France--one of them did die of anorexia a few years ago! Your reflection that we "hate what we love/love what we hate" is thought provoking. Relish today, because the end can come "just like that"! Cheers- Joan
7/22/16 Seeing this work again, I noted how the stark picture and title selection was dramatic and underscored your message. More cheers- Joan
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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Your artwork selection reminded me of the skinny models being boycotted in France--one of them did die of anorexia a few years ago! Your reflection that we "hate what we love/love what we hate" is thought provoking. Relish today, because the end can come "just like that"! Cheers- Joan
7/22/16 Seeing this work again, I noted how the stark picture and title selection was dramatic and underscored your message. More cheers- Joan
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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Amen....our love,given and or received is all the love we will ever know. It's what will judge us worthy or un ....thank you j .....hope you guys hopping happy. Love the bug
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Our son went back to work today, and it won't rain until tomorrow--so, we're hoppin' happy! Here's to love! -Joan
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wooo wooo....I'm with you...-wink-
Comment from livelylinda
Michael: your cryptic messages sometimes turn me inside out. I'm going to ask . . . who had a heart attack? But, I'm probably missing your intent there. It's good but I don't know what you mean. I'm tired tonight and probably shouldn't be attempting to read others poetry. Excuse me and good night. Sleep Thunder
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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Michael: your cryptic messages sometimes turn me inside out. I'm going to ask . . . who had a heart attack? But, I'm probably missing your intent there. It's good but I don't know what you mean. I'm tired tonight and probably shouldn't be attempting to read others poetry. Excuse me and good night. Sleep Thunder
Comment Written 05-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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Hi Thunder...-smile-...um lets see...the video...um was shared by someone special. the song had just been released I guess and was playing constantly, she said...during her husbands hospitalization. He never recovered...unexpected complications. I asked her...when it happened, when they told you...you immediately were sorry for all words said and thoughts expressed in anger....and she said yes....and that she wished for just one more hour to tell him that. I think....that we don't really believe will die....having never experienced it...how could we...even seeing it happen around us...somehow were protected.....-smile-...and then suddenly....I remember when my Dad died....for months later...even still...I get sudden rush of panicked fear, realizing I'll never hear that calming ocean of assurance....ya know until I...die...? -headtilt-...are you sure...? love Bug-
