Engraved in Stone
The passion of love expressed in words.5 total reviews
Comment from Lylise
This is a solid entry into you Use These Words Poetry Prompt. It is cleverly written and this structure is great. Contest requirements appear to be filled. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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This is a solid entry into you Use These Words Poetry Prompt. It is cleverly written and this structure is great. Contest requirements appear to be filled. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments, but I would create a more sensible poem next time.
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What do you mean?
Comment from RYME4U
This free verse is well constructed and has some well chosen
words. The description of Love carved in stone is done well throughout the poem. Good job!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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This free verse is well constructed and has some well chosen
words. The description of Love carved in stone is done well throughout the poem. Good job!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from ElPoetry001
Excellent
Only the most emotional and motivated, under the influence of pheromones, will proclaim his love by writing in stone, or on a tree. Politicians will advise you only to say it, so that you can "walk it back," if someone with any standing protests; a would be suitor from 6th grade.
Nevertheless, writing in stone, or wood, often provides immediate results, thereby avoiding the long courtship.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Excellent
Only the most emotional and motivated, under the influence of pheromones, will proclaim his love by writing in stone, or on a tree. Politicians will advise you only to say it, so that you can "walk it back," if someone with any standing protests; a would be suitor from 6th grade.
Nevertheless, writing in stone, or wood, often provides immediate results, thereby avoiding the long courtship.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comment here.
Comment from Pyrrho
I probably should not have read this one because the motivation is so artificial and ... un-endearing.
It just does not read like poetry, however, I do admit that you managed to make it seem more poetic than ordinary prose, and you did string the required words together without too much artificiality.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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I probably should not have read this one because the motivation is so artificial and ... un-endearing.
It just does not read like poetry, however, I do admit that you managed to make it seem more poetic than ordinary prose, and you did string the required words together without too much artificiality.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comment.
Probably these set up peotyr competitions are not
how the great poets did their stuff.
Comment from thomdble
The picture and the artwork behind the words give the illusion of either being written in stone or carved into a tree. The writer met the challenge and created something quite romantically beautiful also. I give credit and kudos to this artist who made this work so well and my thanks
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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The picture and the artwork behind the words give the illusion of either being written in stone or carved into a tree. The writer met the challenge and created something quite romantically beautiful also. I give credit and kudos to this artist who made this work so well and my thanks
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments.
