Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

A worthy winner. Well done and congratulations. The acrostic bit is quite easily done buthen to gone in a recognised rhyme scheme and metre is much more difficult to achieve. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015

Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Welcome to this site my friend. Bill

reply by Pantygynt on 07-Apr-2015

Thanks for the welcome.

Comment from Travis64

Excellent

Well written and cleverly created to give the reader a well-said message that is truthful and inspiring all at the same time! Thanks for sharing your faith and congrats on your contest win as it is well-deserved!

~Travis64

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015

Thanks Travis for your inspiring review, I appreciate your nice comments. Have a great day my friend. Bill

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

A simple and eloquent poem. I love its directness as if Jesus was talking to me. Great acrostic and message. Congratulations on your win.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015

Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day my friend. Bill

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

How special the art work is for this poem
The words have been written so well
Christ did die for us all and
taught us to love and be peaceful.

honeytree

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015

Thank you honeytree for your excellent review. Happy Easter my friend. Bill

reply by honeytree on 05-Apr-2015

Great to read

Annie

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

Congrats on the win. Easy to see why this won. Simplicity is often the best, because this carries such impact.

A pleasure to read.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015

Thank you Jax for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Happy Easter my friend. Bill

Comment from danpald

Excellent

For like Mary a poet knows the truth
When the heart is touched by the muse
So how can Mary not know the depth
That comes from this act of love herewith

Your poem touches this realm of truth
That like Mary a poet feels in the heart
That there is more to each act of love
Than the eyes can ever meet

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015

Thank you for your excellent review and your offer to send more. Happy Easter my friend. Bill

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Very nicely done acrostic. Congratulations on being the winner of the contest. It is deserved. may your Easter be blessed, Patricia

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015

Thank you Patricia for your excellent review, I appreciate it very much. Happy Easter my friend. Bill

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

We tend to forget how Mary must have felt. Great acrostic poem and congratulations on the contest win!!
~~~~ Teresa~~~~

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015

Thank you Teresa for your excellent review. Happy Easter. Bill

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Absolutely right.
The shortest but the most powerful verse in the Bible.
He was human like the rest of us and can feel as we feel. that is the greatest thing to know.
You worked it into this very well.
Nice

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015

Thanks Barb for your wonderful review, I appreciate it. Happy Easter. Bill

Comment from amahra

Exceptional

Happy Eastern and Happy Resurrection Day as we say at our church. This was a fine and well written Ode to the Son of our Living God. A well deserved win as well. God bless you.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015

Thank you for your wonderful review and rating my friend, I truly appreciate it. Happy Easter and God bless you my friend. Bill