Mary Wept
Jesus soothing His mothers pain...92 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker
This poem is very beautiful for many reasons. When you call Mary, "the chosen one," for a moment you equate her with Jesus, because He is often referred to as the "Chosen One." Very good acrostic poem. Good luck in the contest and have a Happy Easter.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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This poem is very beautiful for many reasons. When you call Mary, "the chosen one," for a moment you equate her with Jesus, because He is often referred to as the "Chosen One." Very good acrostic poem. Good luck in the contest and have a Happy Easter.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hello Cindy,
Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. This one did win the contest. Happy Easter and stay safe...Bill
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Congratulations, Bill. Excellent work!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Mary Wept
by Cedar
Easter Theme Acrostic Contest Winner
Hello my friend
Beautiful poem and presentation. I like the acrostic form. You used it well. Congratulations on your win.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Mary Wept
by Cedar
Easter Theme Acrostic Contest Winner
Hello my friend
Beautiful poem and presentation. I like the acrostic form. You used it well. Congratulations on your win.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it...Bill
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concise acrostic poem is moving and deeply spiritual. I like the arrangement of the points; theyconvey a powerful message about Mary, who was choren by God to bear the Savior; and about her Son, who
promised eternal life to all who believe.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Your concise acrostic poem is moving and deeply spiritual. I like the arrangement of the points; theyconvey a powerful message about Mary, who was choren by God to bear the Savior; and about her Son, who
promised eternal life to all who believe.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hello Janice,
Thank you for your terrific review, I appreciate it. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. Happy Easter and Stay Safe...Bill
Comment from Sally Law
And still a winner year after year, I see. Stellar entry and so spiritually moving. I'm in this attitude today as I compose my own Easter poem. The sacrifice Jesus paid was felt deeply by His mother who ultimately became a disciple and follower as well as his brother, James. Simply beautiful, dear Bill. Have a wonderful and worshipful Easter!
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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And still a winner year after year, I see. Stellar entry and so spiritually moving. I'm in this attitude today as I compose my own Easter poem. The sacrifice Jesus paid was felt deeply by His mother who ultimately became a disciple and follower as well as his brother, James. Simply beautiful, dear Bill. Have a wonderful and worshipful Easter!
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hello Sal,
It's good to hear from you. I hope this response finds you and yours all in good health.
I don't come around much anymore. I guess I just don't have the desire like I used too.
You guys have a wonderful and safe Easter...keep writing...Bill
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We all miss you terribly. Have a wonderful Easter and so good to see you. Blessings!! Sal xoxo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Bill. This is a very well conceived and written acrostic poem. I appreciate your message very much. At Easter, we celebrate the greatest miracle in history when Christ fulfilled His Word and promise.
Congratulations.
Robert
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hello Bill. This is a very well conceived and written acrostic poem. I appreciate your message very much. At Easter, we celebrate the greatest miracle in history when Christ fulfilled His Word and promise.
Congratulations.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hello Robert,
Thank you my friend for your kind review, I appreciate it. Yes, this truly was the greatest miracle that ever happened on this earth. Happy Easter and stay safe...Bill
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Hi Bill. You are welcome. Rejoice in the Easter message and take care of yourself.
Robert
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
What a terrific Easter celebration tribute.
The thoughts of your poem were expressed well.
I am sure that your inspiration that Mary wept was a factual event that we have overlooked continuously.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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What a terrific Easter celebration tribute.
The thoughts of your poem were expressed well.
I am sure that your inspiration that Mary wept was a factual event that we have overlooked continuously.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it very much.
Happy Easter and Stay Safe...Bill
Comment from Janetsue
Congratulations on the Easter Theme Acrostic! It offers deep emotion and a rhyme telling of the Easter story. It is so sad that we cannot gather together to attend church this Sunday, but the message is still going out and can have a great impact on a lot people during this troubling time.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Congratulations on the Easter Theme Acrostic! It offers deep emotion and a rhyme telling of the Easter story. It is so sad that we cannot gather together to attend church this Sunday, but the message is still going out and can have a great impact on a lot people during this troubling time.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you my friend for your excellent review.
Yes, I agree, it is a shame about this Sunday. However, there are a few Pastors in my area that are keeping their church doors open for anyone that wants to attend service even though our Governor and state officials has warned them not to.
The Pastors say that it is their constitutional right...
Happy Easter and Stay Safe...Bill
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem for Easter and the emotion of weeping Jesus expressed when He saw His mother Mary's worries about Us coming death that was planned from the beginning, without His death there will not be a resurrection.
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A very well-written acrostic poem for Easter and the emotion of weeping Jesus expressed when He saw His mother Mary's worries about Us coming death that was planned from the beginning, without His death there will not be a resurrection.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you Sandra for your very excellent review, I appreciate it.
Happy Easter...Bill
Comment from Bill Pinder
Very well written poem with an excellent idea expressed in this acrostic writing about Mary crying at her sons death. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this way. Bill
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Very well written poem with an excellent idea expressed in this acrostic writing about Mary crying at her sons death. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this way. Bill
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it.
Happy Easter...Bill
Comment from Lulube
What an interesting concept in writing his words to his mother. Very soothing and comforting, in an acrostic style giving extra merrits for the mother's feelings. well done
lulube
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What an interesting concept in writing his words to his mother. Very soothing and comforting, in an acrostic style giving extra merrits for the mother's feelings. well done
lulube
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Hello Lulube,
Thank you very much for your wonderful review and rating, I really appreciate it. Have a blessed Easter, my friend...Bill
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welcome
lulube
