Mary Wept
Jesus soothing His mothers pain...92 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a masterful poem about Mary watching her son's cruxifiction and Jesus's words of comfort for her as he dies on the cross. Powerful re-telling of the story in time for Easter celebrations
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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a masterful poem about Mary watching her son's cruxifiction and Jesus's words of comfort for her as he dies on the cross. Powerful re-telling of the story in time for Easter celebrations
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you Jake for your great review, I appreciate it very much.
Have a safe and Happy Easter...Bill
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a beautiful poem. The picture goes well with the words. I can't imagine what Mary went through. It would be hard for me to watch my son die. The poem is well wrltten.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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What a beautiful poem. The picture goes well with the words. I can't imagine what Mary went through. It would be hard for me to watch my son die. The poem is well wrltten.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you Brenda for your excellent review, I appreciate it very much.
Happy Easter to you and yours...Bill
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Congratulations on the Easter Theme Acrostic Poetry Contest win. Mary wept is the shortest verse in the Bible yet one of the most powerful when we consider the complete meaning. Thank you for sharing this poem for Easter. It is lovely.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Congratulations on the Easter Theme Acrostic Poetry Contest win. Mary wept is the shortest verse in the Bible yet one of the most powerful when we consider the complete meaning. Thank you for sharing this poem for Easter. It is lovely.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Marilyn for your great review, I appreciate it.
Happy Easter to you and yours...Bill
Comment from gramalot8
So beautiful. Congratulations on winning the contest. In a way it's sad that there is not more biblical references about Jesus and His Mother, Mary. I would imagine they were very close! And definitely... I am sure Mary Wept on many occasions. Thanks for sharing your message with us.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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So beautiful. Congratulations on winning the contest. In a way it's sad that there is not more biblical references about Jesus and His Mother, Mary. I would imagine they were very close! And definitely... I am sure Mary Wept on many occasions. Thanks for sharing your message with us.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Thank you, my friend, for your wonderful review. I appreciate all the stars and I'm sure Jesus does to.
Yes, I would imagine that Mary spent many of Her days crying, especially, after Jesus started preaching to the masses of people and became well known. There were many that wanted Jesus killed.
I wish you and your family a very safe and Happy Easter...Bill
Comment from teafor2
Cedar, title, picture, theme, tone and compressed verbiage combine to
present a poignant representation of pre-crucifixion of Mary's Son (our
Savior)...You've limned a perfect Easter poem for Christians...If only the
fighting/killing/horrifics weren't taking place as we pray, write, review and prepare to celebrate the biggest miracle of all in less than a week. It's easy
to see how your acrostic contest entry won the competition. Congratu-lation on a timely work. teafor2
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Cedar, title, picture, theme, tone and compressed verbiage combine to
present a poignant representation of pre-crucifixion of Mary's Son (our
Savior)...You've limned a perfect Easter poem for Christians...If only the
fighting/killing/horrifics weren't taking place as we pray, write, review and prepare to celebrate the biggest miracle of all in less than a week. It's easy
to see how your acrostic contest entry won the competition. Congratu-lation on a timely work. teafor2
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Hello teafor2,
I appreciate your kind words in your excellent review very much.
I wish you and yours a very Happy Easter...Bill
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You are welcome, and ditto on the Easter wishes:)) teafor2
Comment from papa55mike
Mother Mary wept beneath the cross with John beside her. I can imagine her heartbreak when Jesus said, "Look at your Son now." What a wonderfully written poem. Congrats on the win!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Mother Mary wept beneath the cross with John beside her. I can imagine her heartbreak when Jesus said, "Look at your Son now." What a wonderfully written poem. Congrats on the win!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Hello Mike,
Thank you for your wonderful review, I truly appreciate your kind words.
Have a blessed Easter Day...Bill
Comment from BethShelby
This is an excellent poem. I wonder if Christ might have said something like that to his mother before he was crucified. I see you have made an acrostic poem that rhymes. That makes it even better
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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This is an excellent poem. I wonder if Christ might have said something like that to his mother before he was crucified. I see you have made an acrostic poem that rhymes. That makes it even better
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Hello Beth,
Yes, I do imagine that Jesus did say something of that nature to his Mother, Mary. Possibly along the way while Jesus Christ was carrying the cross.
I wish you and yours a very Happy Easter...Bill
Comment from jessizero
I can see why this poem won the Easter Theme Acrostic contest. It was painful and beautiful. I had to stop and think of Mary after you posted this. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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I can see why this poem won the Easter Theme Acrostic contest. It was painful and beautiful. I had to stop and think of Mary after you posted this. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Hello Jessi,
Thank you very much for dropping by with your excellent review, I appreciate your kind words.
I wish you a very belated welcome to Fanstory. I hope you have a long enjoyable stay...Happy Easter...Bill
Comment from RodG
Your poem poignantly reminds us of what it must have been like for Mary to watch her son die so brutally. I like how you focus on Jesus, speaking to his mother and telling her what his death will mean for those who believe in Him. Your poem is truly worthy of the win. Rod
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Your poem poignantly reminds us of what it must have been like for Mary to watch her son die so brutally. I like how you focus on Jesus, speaking to his mother and telling her what his death will mean for those who believe in Him. Your poem is truly worthy of the win. Rod
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you Rod for your great review, I appreciate your kind words very much. I wish you and your family a Happy Easter...Bill
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Bill.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I can see why you won this contest.
-You wrote a very good acrostic with
good description and rhyme.
-I like how He is addressing her and
tells her to "Weep from happiness."
-Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Bill.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I can see why you won this contest.
-You wrote a very good acrostic with
good description and rhyme.
-I like how He is addressing her and
tells her to "Weep from happiness."
-Well done.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thanks Pam for your kind words, I appreciate it very much.
I wish you and your family a very happy and peaceful Easter Sabbath...Bill
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You are very welcome, Bill, and I appreciate your reply. You have a very good Easter, too.
