Chasing of the Wind.
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Comment from c_lucas
I have not been following this story line. it is very well written and shows the psychological problems of the priest.
ERROR
my instructions are two (TO) give it to you
and a lose shirt (LOOSE)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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I have not been following this story line. it is very well written and shows the psychological problems of the priest.
ERROR
my instructions are two (TO) give it to you
and a lose shirt (LOOSE)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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Thanks for the encouraging remarks. I just can't believe how such errors happen in spite of grammar and spell check. Thanks for pointing out.
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you're welcome, Niyuta. Charlie
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Hope you will read the last chapter I will be posting tomorrow.
Comment from samsaysagain
I am only giving this three stars because there were several instances where present and/or past tense were incorrectly used and made reading slower than usually necessary while parts were reread. There were also errors in use of articles, i.e. a, the, it and as usual in a lot reads I found the wrong form of the words 'to' 'too' or 'two' used. Spacing between words was missing at times.
Those are my reasong for not grading four stars.
Overall, my IMO on the basic subject of this writing is that of the Bible and the story of Adam and Eve in the garden of Eden when God took a rib from Adam
because it is 'not good for man to be alone' and formed Eve, and called her
WO-MAN, formed from a man's rib. IMO God created man and woman for the distinct purpose of NATURAL procreation and that purpose cannot be fulfilled in a homosexual relationship. I take no offense at this writing but believe I should be true to my beliefs and state what I believe to be God's will. Thanks be to God.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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I am only giving this three stars because there were several instances where present and/or past tense were incorrectly used and made reading slower than usually necessary while parts were reread. There were also errors in use of articles, i.e. a, the, it and as usual in a lot reads I found the wrong form of the words 'to' 'too' or 'two' used. Spacing between words was missing at times.
Those are my reasong for not grading four stars.
Overall, my IMO on the basic subject of this writing is that of the Bible and the story of Adam and Eve in the garden of Eden when God took a rib from Adam
because it is 'not good for man to be alone' and formed Eve, and called her
WO-MAN, formed from a man's rib. IMO God created man and woman for the distinct purpose of NATURAL procreation and that purpose cannot be fulfilled in a homosexual relationship. I take no offense at this writing but believe I should be true to my beliefs and state what I believe to be God's will. Thanks be to God.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your review but I don't believe what you have written. Give me specific lines to sight errors. It is your privilege to write what you want and I have the privilege as I see life. The story is about love and that is all Jesus gave to this world of hateful begets of all kinds. Love people as they are and not as anyone wants them to be. That is the message of Christ I believe. As far as spacing is concerned I can do nothing about it after it is cut and pasted on the webpage.
