Comment from Day Z Chayn

Excellent

The 'coat hanger' reminds me of what happened in the days before abortion clinics, where one would cross the border into Mexico to have abortions done. If not, the alternative was the 'coat hanger' in the 'back alley.'

I'm glad the girl stood her ground against the new boy. I would have liked to have a person like this 'watch my back' as I was growing up, even if she was 'just a girl.'

Blessings,
Shane

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015

Thank you!

With 15 children and a few that weren't born, many people suggested my mom should have tried something like (the coat hanger).

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

hahahaha! G'day mate, sounds like an aboriginal tribal game to me LOL. You are doing really well and trying very hard and I admire you for it. I read one of the reviews on this one from a "standard member" which means that they don't pay the fees to be on this sight, and I saw your confusion from the review. I was confused by it also. My advice is to just ignore the garbled arrogance and keep working on your writing and I will be here to help you as I promised on your first day.

A couple of SPAGS...

"This little town being made up of huge family's (families)"

"They jumped and leap(ed) on each other"

"Any home the kids choose(chose) could easily be demolished."

"The "Bateman" family had many girls a few less(had many girls and a few boys in it) boys."

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015

Thanks as usual.

I as you have probably guessed, have OCD. Also been diagnosed with BI Polar.

You are great, and explain things so I have a chance of understanding them.

Coral

Comment from SkyAsia

Good

When someone needs news there are adult language rules. You break all the childish rules in a full testimony of kids mark their yard. When we talked to these primitives on campus they do have fearful personal ideals. Okay the assignment is done. Chase the parents into private doing and observing. You need to be told a lot more times. The hope to be a written expression is there.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015

Thank You for your reply.

I am not sure what you mean.

I assume that you are saying that the advice is not getting through to my thick head.

If so you are right. I have taken writing and grammar classes but seem to not get it.

I start another class next week.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I was the scrawny kid that none of the boys could catch because I was too fast...we crawled down the peach tree at night and ran like wild things down the road,,, we would get on a sapling pine tree bend it back to the ground and fling ourselves into the sky...landed in soft mud fortunately..
It was fun
God bless...scary author notes

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015

These memories make us long for another time.

Thank you for the reply.