Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Michael: this is a most beautiful poem. It is easily six-star-worthy but virtual only until Sunday. My favorite lines (all of them, actually) . . . ". . .in sixty seconds Peter Pans medicine never never lands". Smooth as melted chocolate here. Where has all this "mellow" come from? That is O.K. I don't expect you to tell me but I'm happy for you. Thunder softly.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015

Hi Linda....I hear you're doing much better thanks be God. ...-smile- singing in the choir again...you go girl...ahh I was just thinking of someone and wrote the poem...twenty minutes or so probably....-smile- I'm happy for you...love Michael

Comment from daeneam

Exceptional

I'm glad I've seen your post, dear Michael. I'm so busy, I feel guilty for not dropping by to check on you. But I have reviewed your work with l.raven. I hope we'll work together too.

I missed you! God bless you! c", Mae

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015

Hi Mae...-smile-...thank you sweet Lady. Of course ...I would love to write a poem with you. ...-smile- I know you're busy....me too....but it sure is good to see you when you can....love Michael

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is a nice poem my friend. Wasn't it the Beatles that sung about cotton moon and strawberry fields though. Anyway the poem was very well written and I liked the video. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015

Hi there...-smile- why thank you very much...yea strawberryfields forever i believe...I'm afraid i cant sink that far without pharmaciticuls...so I'm a stick with Van for the time being.....i'm not moving as quick as someday remembers....haha...love bug-

Comment from thomdble

Excellent

Very impressive. You were able to lead me on quite a journey. Thank you. I enjoyed it very much and it did move me. Good job

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 Comment Written 18-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015

why thasnk you ...so much...-smile- real pleased you enjoyed...love Bug-

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

HI Michael, very well written Michael...nice and cozy...love your style unique to you....and love the video...love you sweetie ...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015

huh...? hey hey hey...I know its late...you've come to expect it...but wtf...are you talking about....this absolutely nothing to do with prescription drugs...are you high Linda...lol ahh -headshake-...ah well....leave it to Beaver....Love you anyway Bug-

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015

what I meant to say was....thank you very much for taking the time....however the physision and pharmacuiticals were metaphoric representation...thank you sweet Linda ...love Michael

reply by l.raven on 20-Mar-2015

just saw your replies on my sight...not high...just wanted to review your poem before I went to bed...sigh...love always Michael...

Comment from granny goes viral

Exceptional

Love this. Where have you been? Hope you are o.k.
Anyway, I really liked this well crafted poem. Sounds like a rage against the pharmaceutical commercials.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015

Ah Shelia....-smile- I'm a very busy man...I got meetings and people pulling my chain and stuff...its just part of my life now. I'm not complaining though, I don't plan on being another pissed off child star...-wink-...I got this...Love bug-

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I relished the mesmerizing, floating features and words on the white background. Your references to the "snake charmers," "physicians" and "Peter Pans" are intriguing and your images, like the "cloud cover meets cotton field" are captivating. Cheers back- Joan

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 Comment Written 18-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015

Hey Bright eyes...-smile- whatch ya doing...ah well thank you...I've been feeling funny...I hope this helps...we hope this helps...um , yea the doctors are willing to try anything at this point. Yep hocus pockus, mombo jumbo...whatever you got...lol...ah heck I'm sorry Teach, I told you , I feel funny...Love bug-

reply by Joan E. on 18-Mar-2015

I'm sorry to hear you feel off-color. Drink lots of water and get some sun, if possible--maybe, add a multi-vitamin or a probiotic. I hope you get back to your energized self soon. Thinking good thoughts and sending healthy hugs- Joan

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015

been taking magneezium and calcium...is that good...?

reply by Joan E. on 18-Mar-2015

Yes, we tend to get depleted in those minerals as we get older--and they need each other to be effective. Hope you're feeling better- Joan

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015

okay great...thank you...I do feel better....thanks J....what else do I need...? for real....what do you think...?

reply by Joan E. on 19-Mar-2015

A multi-vitamin/mineral supplement, even if you eat lots of fresh fruits and vegetables, since so much of our food has less nutritional value than we need due to chemical fertilizers, pesticides, processing, and lag time in transport. Costco carries one that is quite complete and reasonable. Good luck and get back to your perky self soon- Joan

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015

-salute- ...thank you Joan of my arc...-smile-...sleep well French Princess...-smile-

reply by Joan E. on 19-Mar-2015

Merci mille fois (one thousand times)- Jean d'Arc

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015

eeww...Poly...J...hey how'm I supposed to go to sleep now...ta stop that....-wink-

reply by Joan E. on 19-Mar-2015

Just count birds flying over the Eiffel Tower!! Smiles- Joan