From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "The Graveyard of Hope"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Vance - an excellent submission for the faith contest. This has that sacred prayer quality that has me pausing in reflection. The only thing that popped for me for the amount of "and" in this - I would of tried to remove them:)
Nicely penned my friend and good luck.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Dear Vance - an excellent submission for the faith contest. This has that sacred prayer quality that has me pausing in reflection. The only thing that popped for me for the amount of "and" in this - I would of tried to remove them:)
Nicely penned my friend and good luck.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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HI Moreen: so delightful to hear from you and thanks so much for your comments. I was waxing a bit biblical on the "AND"s but I get your point and thanks again! Hugs: Vance
Comment from Ben Colder
And the words of God, then thundered across the universe calling all living souls to the place of love. Very strong wording. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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And the words of God, then thundered across the universe calling all living souls to the place of love. Very strong wording. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Thanks Ben, your comments are greatly appreciated and your wishes are as well. Thanks Vance
Comment from meggie13
Many people are is lost to the pleasures of the world. They mock believers and call them names. Who is going to have the last laugh when the truth is revealed? He said to knock at the door and He will answer. There is still time . Well written with a good message.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Many people are is lost to the pleasures of the world. They mock believers and call them names. Who is going to have the last laugh when the truth is revealed? He said to knock at the door and He will answer. There is still time . Well written with a good message.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much meggie13.....much appreciated HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
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You are welcome, Vance. meg
Comment from royowen
I think scripture has predicted times like this Vance, but The Lord knows that people because of pride and deception and because to come into the light would mean it reveals their sin, so they would rather stay in their sin and darkness! Beautifully done Vance, you have produced another articulate and forceful work. Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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I think scripture has predicted times like this Vance, but The Lord knows that people because of pride and deception and because to come into the light would mean it reveals their sin, so they would rather stay in their sin and darkness! Beautifully done Vance, you have produced another articulate and forceful work. Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Hi Roy and WOW, thanks for your wonderful review and generous six stars. Vance
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My pleasure my friend,
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thank you Roy so much for your wonderful review...so great!! Vance
Comment from Glasstruth
It's a materialistic world more than ever. Remember the hippies of the late sixties and early seventies when they went to join communes and live on bare essentials. They grew their own food and gardened, shared everything. Where are those people now? Love the title to this. It drew me in right away. Also liked the way you explained thing in your author notes. Like the phrase "our GOD of nature and the universe." Faith seems more clouded with these gadgets which is out of control. Very thought provoking. Les
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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It's a materialistic world more than ever. Remember the hippies of the late sixties and early seventies when they went to join communes and live on bare essentials. They grew their own food and gardened, shared everything. Where are those people now? Love the title to this. It drew me in right away. Also liked the way you explained thing in your author notes. Like the phrase "our GOD of nature and the universe." Faith seems more clouded with these gadgets which is out of control. Very thought provoking. Les
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Hi Les and great to hear from you. As always, your comments are meaningful, helpful, coherent and welcomed with open ears and mind. Thanks so much for your perspectives and the fine five stars. All are much appreciated and I look forward to your next write and your next review on mine again. All the best and thanks again! Vance
Comment from Dean Kuch
Outstanding, very thought provoking free verse you've managed to create here for the contest, Vance. You make several excellent points, not just in your poetic piece, but in your author's notes as well.
You know what they say... "The grass is always greener..."
Excellent work, and good luck to you in the Faith Poetry contest. :)
~Dean
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Outstanding, very thought provoking free verse you've managed to create here for the contest, Vance. You make several excellent points, not just in your poetic piece, but in your author's notes as well.
You know what they say... "The grass is always greener..."
Excellent work, and good luck to you in the Faith Poetry contest. :)
~Dean
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Hello Dean! What a great honor to hear from you and thanks so much for your very meaningful remarks and the five wonderful stars. Much appreciated my friend and many thanks. I'll be around shortly to return the favor. All the best! Vance
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Hey, Vance. The pleasure was entirely mine, my friend, as always. :)
~DK
Comment from slwerder
About all that can be said is "AMEN...." I can only imagine the day we meet God but until then I "hope." I enjoyed your poem...
slwerder
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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About all that can be said is "AMEN...." I can only imagine the day we meet God but until then I "hope." I enjoyed your poem...
slwerder
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Hi slwerder: glad to meet you and I want to thank you so much for your kind remarks and generous five stars. I shall come around and visit you soon! Thanks again and please stay tuned! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
