Love Songs For Every Heart
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Comment from Alaskastory
'Just Before the Sun Goes Down' holds words that bring tears. The poet's true feelings burst forth in such eloquent words that every reader will want to hold your hand. Congratulations on the big 58th! We will find a celebrate that in thoughts across the miles, MissM.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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'Just Before the Sun Goes Down' holds words that bring tears. The poet's true feelings burst forth in such eloquent words that every reader will want to hold your hand. Congratulations on the big 58th! We will find a celebrate that in thoughts across the miles, MissM.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Miss A!! How nice to see a review from you, and what a beautiful one it is too! Thank you so much for the kind words and golden star. Thanks for helping us celebrate our anniversary too. Now that I've admitted how old I am... I can never put up those ten-year-old pictures again. :"( Eventually, I will get a new one.
Hugs to you... MissM
Comment from GWinterwin
What a beautiful tribute to God, and your husband. The beautiful picture of Yosemite I like, we live just a hundred miles or so from there. Good message here about love and commitment.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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What a beautiful tribute to God, and your husband. The beautiful picture of Yosemite I like, we live just a hundred miles or so from there. Good message here about love and commitment.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Thank you for this great review, George. I didn't realize you lived that close to Yosemite. We are about 155 miles away. I love it there. I truly appreciated all you said about my anniversary poem, and the extra star was such a nice touch too. :p Thanks!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very fine, well-written poem on longevity of your marriage filled with tenderness and affirmation. Many wonderful lines: "The path is rocky, like the road
that you and I have trod," "years have bound us closer than
we ever dreamed could be." Congratulations on your 58 years together.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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This is a very fine, well-written poem on longevity of your marriage filled with tenderness and affirmation. Many wonderful lines: "The path is rocky, like the road
that you and I have trod," "years have bound us closer than
we ever dreamed could be." Congratulations on your 58 years together.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Thank you for this very nice review of my poem, and for the congratulations too. I can't believe it has been that long because I'm still 49! LOL One day I'm going to have to face reality I guess. I do appreciate so much your many kind words. MM
Comment from tfawcus
What an inspiration this poem is, a life well lived and well loved is the best we can strive for. Not much else is as worthwhile. Hoping you continue to have many more happy days together in the future.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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What an inspiration this poem is, a life well lived and well loved is the best we can strive for. Not much else is as worthwhile. Hoping you continue to have many more happy days together in the future.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your generous and kind words Tony. I do appreciate this review very much. MM
Comment from Delahay
Wow! I am impressed. To be together for so long and to still have such a strong love and connection to each other and to your faith. This poem tells such a wonderful story of this great love story.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Wow! I am impressed. To be together for so long and to still have such a strong love and connection to each other and to your faith. This poem tells such a wonderful story of this great love story.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Thank you for this wonderful review. Your kind words meant so much to me. It really doesn't feel like a long time, but it seems long when I see it written down. I do feel richly blessed.
Comment from Deborah Marie
Virtual six! Lovely poem and artwork. The two enhance each other. Light and airy progression, rhythm and flow for a nice read. Wonderful wording. My parents will be married 59 years on May 26, 2015. Happy Anniversary... It nice to see married couples as happy as my parents are and for so long. We are indeed blessed by God even me on my second marriage of almost 9 years; a second chance for me...
Take care and God Bless, Deb
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Virtual six! Lovely poem and artwork. The two enhance each other. Light and airy progression, rhythm and flow for a nice read. Wonderful wording. My parents will be married 59 years on May 26, 2015. Happy Anniversary... It nice to see married couples as happy as my parents are and for so long. We are indeed blessed by God even me on my second marriage of almost 9 years; a second chance for me...
Take care and God Bless, Deb
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Yes... I agree heartily with your comments. It is so nice to see happily married couples, especially in this day of easy divorce and so few sticking together. The rewards are so great. Stay with it, and you will be so glad you did. Thank you so much for this nice review and for the virtual six. I appreciate it.
Comment from honeytree
Excellent art work for these words.
How wonderful to be together for a long time
In life we can all have our good and not so
good times in life but love an being with
someone we love is so special.
honey tree
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Excellent art work for these words.
How wonderful to be together for a long time
In life we can all have our good and not so
good times in life but love an being with
someone we love is so special.
honey tree
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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I agree, honeytree. No life flows perfectly all the time, but when you have a loved companion, it sure makes things better for everyone. I so much appreciate your kind review. Thank you very much.
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Love what you wrote.
Annie
Comment from forestport12
This without a doubt is the best poem I can remember in recent memory. The metaphor of Yosemite and the rock connected with the one you love, an unchanging yet guiding force. loved it! I want your permission to give this to my wife in a card. Stan
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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This without a doubt is the best poem I can remember in recent memory. The metaphor of Yosemite and the rock connected with the one you love, an unchanging yet guiding force. loved it! I want your permission to give this to my wife in a card. Stan
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Awwww Stan... you are so poetic, I think you could write a better one, but of course you have my permission to do anything you like with this poem. I'm so honored that you would give it six stars, and say such nice things about it. Thank you very much. You've really made my day with this review. MM
Comment from Domino 2
Congratulations to you and hubby on such a long and loving relationship, MM.
Excellent imagery of your walk, and expression of your special feelings and gratitude towards hubby and God.
Top flow, rhymes and enjambment.
Excellent=t and very sweet read.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Congratulations to you and hubby on such a long and loving relationship, MM.
Excellent imagery of your walk, and expression of your special feelings and gratitude towards hubby and God.
Top flow, rhymes and enjambment.
Excellent=t and very sweet read.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Thank you for this kind review Ray. I'm glad you read this one, and now you know I must be very, very old. :p (but only in years, not in spirit.)
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I must admit I couldn't resist the temptation of adding up the years of the relationship and about when it must have started, MM.
Darnit - and I thought you were in your mid-thirties. ;-)
All the best to you, my young at heart and talented friend.
Ray xx
Comment from judiverse
This is beautifully written, and a wonderful celebration of your 58 years of marriage. Congratulations to you. As you visit Yosemite, you can see comparisons to your life. The path is rocky, as the life of a couple married for so many years may be. Excellent reference to the redwood tree (so sturdy and enduring). Last stanza is particularly lovely. Excellent attention to rhyme and flow in this. Everything comes together to make this outstanding. judi
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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This is beautifully written, and a wonderful celebration of your 58 years of marriage. Congratulations to you. As you visit Yosemite, you can see comparisons to your life. The path is rocky, as the life of a couple married for so many years may be. Excellent reference to the redwood tree (so sturdy and enduring). Last stanza is particularly lovely. Excellent attention to rhyme and flow in this. Everything comes together to make this outstanding. judi
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Judi, you write the most wonderful reviews! I always enjoy reading your sharp analysis and understanding, and of course the way you express your thoughts is so beautiful too. Thank you for this review.
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You're very welcome. I appreciate your sweet comments. judi
