Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "The Old Man"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
38 total reviews
Comment from CR Delport
It is actually very sad to know how many young children grew up not knowing a parent because they were killed fighting for their country. I wonder if humanity will ever get to a point where we can live in a world where there is no more wars?
This is very well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015
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It is actually very sad to know how many young children grew up not knowing a parent because they were killed fighting for their country. I wonder if humanity will ever get to a point where we can live in a world where there is no more wars?
This is very well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015
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Nice sentiment but doubt it will ever happen, unfortunately. Thanks for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from MelB
Fantastically written tribute to all who have fought for our freedom. You have done a great job of listing the horrors of both sides, for the ones at home waiting and for the soldier gone and fighting for his life and his country. I like the repeat of I knew I'd never be the same at the beginning and end.
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Fantastically written tribute to all who have fought for our freedom. You have done a great job of listing the horrors of both sides, for the ones at home waiting and for the soldier gone and fighting for his life and his country. I like the repeat of I knew I'd never be the same at the beginning and end.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and continued support.
Comment from courtneysthoughts
Beautiful commentary on the significance of war for those on the home front. I am a military wife to a deployed soldier, so I have a personal appreciation for your words. I also write mostly military poetry based on our experiences, so it was good for me to read another's perspective.
Thank you for sharing,
Courtney
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Beautiful commentary on the significance of war for those on the home front. I am a military wife to a deployed soldier, so I have a personal appreciation for your words. I also write mostly military poetry based on our experiences, so it was good for me to read another's perspective.
Thank you for sharing,
Courtney
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. I will have to check out your poetry.
Comment from pharp
First of all, thank you for your service and for the excellent, well penned tributes to all your fellow vets. My husband is a veteran of the Vietnam and Gulf wars. This is a must read for him. I really enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing. Pharp
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First of all, thank you for your service and for the excellent, well penned tributes to all your fellow vets. My husband is a veteran of the Vietnam and Gulf wars. This is a must read for him. I really enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing. Pharp
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from jennifdrake
I love this one! I am the daughter of a vet who served three times in Viet Nam. The subject is still hard for me to write about but I did recently post a story of my visits while he was hospitalized for a year at Fort Campbell. Thank you for posting this one! I am going to save it so I can read it often. There is nothing about this poem that I would change.
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I love this one! I am the daughter of a vet who served three times in Viet Nam. The subject is still hard for me to write about but I did recently post a story of my visits while he was hospitalized for a year at Fort Campbell. Thank you for posting this one! I am going to save it so I can read it often. There is nothing about this poem that I would change.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support.
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Thank you for reminding us of the importance of our freedom.
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Thank you for reminding us of the importance of our freedom.
Comment from Sis Cat
This poem is a great tribute to all American war veterans. I love the "Unknown Soldier" feel about this poem because there are many soldiers whose name we will never know but still deserves thanks. Thank you for sharing and caring.
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This poem is a great tribute to all American war veterans. I love the "Unknown Soldier" feel about this poem because there are many soldiers whose name we will never know but still deserves thanks. Thank you for sharing and caring.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This is a wonderful poem. We had a young man die over seas who was a newly wed and left behind a young woman that I had a chance to work with briefly. You did a great job with this :)
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This is a wonderful poem. We had a young man die over seas who was a newly wed and left behind a young woman that I had a chance to work with briefly. You did a great job with this :)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
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Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant piece of poetic art dear Brett! It showcases the battle between the action and emotion so clearly. It is an absolutely great tribute to all veterans.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
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This is a brilliant piece of poetic art dear Brett! It showcases the battle between the action and emotion so clearly. It is an absolutely great tribute to all veterans.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nicely done Brett,
Congratulations!
-excellent tone and rhythm lyrics
-good flow
-I like he line, 'though her world was devastated
the night she got the call.'
I had that call once in my life and it is the worse call one can ever get.
My friend is deployed in KABUL, Afghanistan now. And I pray for him and his safe return home.
Write on!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Nicely done Brett,
Congratulations!
-excellent tone and rhythm lyrics
-good flow
-I like he line, 'though her world was devastated
the night she got the call.'
I had that call once in my life and it is the worse call one can ever get.
My friend is deployed in KABUL, Afghanistan now. And I pray for him and his safe return home.
Write on!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support.
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Definitely can imagine this as a country song. very well composed and deeply felt.
Country songs need to bring out emotion and this one does it. Yup that ol' tear rolling down a cheek.
Good job!
Jewell
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Definitely can imagine this as a country song. very well composed and deeply felt.
Country songs need to bring out emotion and this one does it. Yup that ol' tear rolling down a cheek.
Good job!
Jewell
Comment Written 28-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
