Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Keep Your Eyes On Calvary"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
30 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
After God entered into a new covenant with man, the cross on Golgotha became the focal point of mankind's salvation. No longer were the old laws in play, Christ took care of those for us when he took our place and was nailed to the tree. It isn't about the good works we do, or how much we tithe at church service each Sunday, or even that we simply pray. It's all about Calvary's cross, and the sacrifice Jesus made for all of us.
Great work, Brett. The rhyming, flow and tempo were very well done...~Dean
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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After God entered into a new covenant with man, the cross on Golgotha became the focal point of mankind's salvation. No longer were the old laws in play, Christ took care of those for us when he took our place and was nailed to the tree. It isn't about the good works we do, or how much we tithe at church service each Sunday, or even that we simply pray. It's all about Calvary's cross, and the sacrifice Jesus made for all of us.
Great work, Brett. The rhyming, flow and tempo were very well done...~Dean
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Once again thank you for your wonderful comments and support. Always appreciate them, and you are so right about what you said in your comments. "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary".
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Sure thing, Brett. Anytime, my friend...~DK
Comment from Glasstruth
Sounds like song lyrics even though the rhyming isn't that clear, but flows smoothly. Like the repetition of the last two lines of each verse which really brings this all together. Wonderfully written. Les
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Sounds like song lyrics even though the rhyming isn't that clear, but flows smoothly. Like the repetition of the last two lines of each verse which really brings this all together. Wonderfully written. Les
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Brett: Great song and honor to Jesus, keep your eyes on Calvary. What a great witness. Do you have this song to music? Congrats on your awards. You can hang out in my portfolio campfire anytime. I'm sure you will find many brothers and sisters in Christ singing songs with you. God bless! <>< flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Brett: Great song and honor to Jesus, keep your eyes on Calvary. What a great witness. Do you have this song to music? Congrats on your awards. You can hang out in my portfolio campfire anytime. I'm sure you will find many brothers and sisters in Christ singing songs with you. God bless! <>< flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and continued support. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from angelface2
I like your work, Brett. And I especially like the lines, "Cast your vote for Jesus, keep you eyes on Calvary." This is a good Christian song. I love good old Country Music, too. :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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I like your work, Brett. And I especially like the lines, "Cast your vote for Jesus, keep you eyes on Calvary." This is a good Christian song. I love good old Country Music, too. :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The lyrics written were heart felt and
meaningful to me. The author's words are creative, thought provoking and strong. The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Excellent Poem! The lyrics written were heart felt and
meaningful to me. The author's words are creative, thought provoking and strong. The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support. I really do appreciate them very much.
Comment from kiwijenny
I have cast my vote for JESUS....that makes me devoted...lol as are you
I don't want to miss out on heaven do you...I cast my vote for Him and His Father and Spirit...and try to live as he would have me do
God bless and thankyou for stellar lyrics
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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I have cast my vote for JESUS....that makes me devoted...lol as are you
I don't want to miss out on heaven do you...I cast my vote for Him and His Father and Spirit...and try to live as he would have me do
God bless and thankyou for stellar lyrics
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and your support. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You have done an excellent job with this poem. The presentation is great. The flow is very good. I like rhyme but did not miss it here in this poem with an occasional rhyme.
I see nothing to change. Your message is strong. Too many give up or give into things that are wrong because of their despair. Reading your poem gives one hope. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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You have done an excellent job with this poem. The presentation is great. The flow is very good. I like rhyme but did not miss it here in this poem with an occasional rhyme.
I see nothing to change. Your message is strong. Too many give up or give into things that are wrong because of their despair. Reading your poem gives one hope. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from valerieellis
Another beautifully written poem (lyrics). I am stalking your portfolio, hehe :) This was beautiful and the picture certainly added to the power of your words. You are very gifted! Your rhyme and rhythm flow naturally (just as they do in all your writings). I would love to hear this put to music! God bless :)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Another beautifully written poem (lyrics). I am stalking your portfolio, hehe :) This was beautiful and the picture certainly added to the power of your words. You are very gifted! Your rhyme and rhythm flow naturally (just as they do in all your writings). I would love to hear this put to music! God bless :)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you again.
Comment from fimarie78
I really like these lyrics. Cast your vote on Jesus, Keep your eyes on Calvary is a fabulous hook/ refrain.
There were lots of lines I liked a lot:- Tomorrow may be too late, the King of glory's calling, he died to open Heaven's door.
I will definitely be checking out your other lyrics. Do you have melodies for them at all?
I smiled when I read that you are the number one country music fan. though that was me :)
thanks for sharing. I hope it is alright to add to my bookcase.Fiona
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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I really like these lyrics. Cast your vote on Jesus, Keep your eyes on Calvary is a fabulous hook/ refrain.
There were lots of lines I liked a lot:- Tomorrow may be too late, the King of glory's calling, he died to open Heaven's door.
I will definitely be checking out your other lyrics. Do you have melodies for them at all?
I smiled when I read that you are the number one country music fan. though that was me :)
thanks for sharing. I hope it is alright to add to my bookcase.Fiona
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments and support. Really do appreciate it a whole lot.
Comment from boxergirl
Hey Brett. I think your lyrics for this song are wonderful. It flows smooth and easy and the repetition of "so cast your vote for Jesus..." sends a great message. Would love to hear the music with it. 8-)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Hey Brett. I think your lyrics for this song are wonderful. It flows smooth and easy and the repetition of "so cast your vote for Jesus..." sends a great message. Would love to hear the music with it. 8-)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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So would I. I don't have any music for them except for what is in my head. I mentally hear the tune for a song and write the lyrics. Always have. Thanks for your comments and support. I really do appreciate them very much.
