Comment from robina1978

Excellent

The artwork is absolutely beautiful and complements your lyric poem perfectly. I can't judge if it can be sung. But you give a clear message about alcoholism. Stopping is not easy, the wife is an angel. Rhymes all the way.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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Comment from fimarie78

Exceptional

I agree with you. These lyrics are great.

When I took ill, my ex became an alcoholic and it is so hard.

I love the refrain.

In the same way as reading improves our writing, listening to country music will influence your lyrics.

You are very talented, my friend.

still want to hear them with a melody though :)
Fiona

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

They say the first step to help is realizing and accepting that you need help. This is very touching and very well written. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

What a beautiful piece of lyrics which we have here! The song flows well and your refrain verse is absolutely great. Well done indeed with this proficient work

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I liked this song. The only thing I didn't like was the over use of 'me.' It made the words to the song very jerky and stopped the otherwise smooth flow. Thank you for sharing. Well liked.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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Comment from kriver

Excellent

Hi
I was wondering if you have set this to music.
This write has a very good flow of words
a very good story line
good character descriptions
Over all I think it is a very good write.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Brett, that a great piece mate, the lyrics arevery easily read and enjoyable. Do you put them to music? I too am a CM fan and still get requests for them today when I sing here. Great stuff, cheers Fez

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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Comment from fairy77

Excellent

This is very nice and would make an excellent country song of love and perseverance. I enjoyed the this piece and could picture a guitar. Would like to wish you luck. Well done! Beth fairy77.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I get the drinking problem loud and clear and whoever says there is no such thing as angels just hasn't had a close enough experience with one. I have an angel who watches over me. Angels do exist :)

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2015

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a special poem. I enjoyed it for the rhyme and the way you told the story--not so much the story.

I see that you refer to this as lyrics. Is this to be a song?

I see no changes.

The flow was great from beginning to end. There was no break.

Good job and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2015

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