The Wonder
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Comment from Joan E.
Hello again--you are really prolific these days and wonderfully inspired by love. I admired your alliteration of "s's" and imagery, like the "lighthouse" plus the glowing artwork. More cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
Hello again--you are really prolific these days and wonderfully inspired by love. I admired your alliteration of "s's" and imagery, like the "lighthouse" plus the glowing artwork. More cheers- Joan
Comment Written 02-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
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Hey J...-smile- ...you brought the shine and everything...-headwag- wooo...ahh its a curse...on full moons I get a lil' goofy....and howlwoooo speradically ...if people stare and they do...I just say teret syndrom ....and they shake their heads and look at me pitful....you cuss at people too and get away with it...if your good at it. Anyway outlaw good talking to ya...love bug-
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Sending lots of sunshine! -Joan
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yes you do...and I thank you...-smile-
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Smiles- Joan
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Michael - this one touches deep, such a slow sense of awe, the threads of love and the gifts it brings. This has wonderful emotion and imagery...it inspires the notion of love and more love...to give and to receive.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
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"just soft sudden down pore" // pour
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
Dear Michael - this one touches deep, such a slow sense of awe, the threads of love and the gifts it brings. This has wonderful emotion and imagery...it inspires the notion of love and more love...to give and to receive.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Edit check:
"just soft sudden down pore" // pour
Comment Written 02-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
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O yes maam...yes maam!...that's exactly what it says..way way Waaaay more...huh...ya know its quite remarkable how you interpret this as though it were written just for you...whats funny is its the same for me with everything you pen... it touches me were no one else is supposed to...ya know that deep place you -handtwirl- eluded to earlier, that place I'll ...I 'll never leave or forget...way deep inside you...-smile-...wow...what a wonderful world! Bugs in love!