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The Token Alpha Male

A Short Story By Kelly Cahill

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Comment from Sasha
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This is a delightful contest and I have enjoyed several fun entries. You have done a great job with this and I got a real kick out of it. It is a terrific entry and I sincerely wish you all the best.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

Comment from gypsycaravan
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Poor mikey. Donna and her zoo have made him the zookeeper and in charge of the poop patrol. Very soon, he will need to find new lodging as there will be no more room at the inn for him. The animals will have taken over. Very clever write, mikey. Bravo.

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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OHOHOH the master yet again.
I loved it. Pet rescuer and sometimes wonder if theyare smarter than I am. OH yes.
Excellently written as usual and the best in the contest

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

Comment from Eric1
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Hi Mike, still laughing out loud at this one, the antics of those darling animals had me in stitches,great piece of writing that certainly deserves to take the number one spot, good luck in the contest my friend.

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015