With Wonder of Woven Words
Short essay on the meaning of writing View on Classic FS23 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
Loved the poem, though I myself would make one tiny change.
In the final line of the second verse I'd replace the MY with THE. My reason, in my mind MY personalises the line as self whereas the rest of the poem refers to plural with words like WE, US and OUR.
The descriptions you use to describe poetry are magical. This is one of the best poems I've read in a long time. In fact I wish I had written it.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Loved the poem, though I myself would make one tiny change.
In the final line of the second verse I'd replace the MY with THE. My reason, in my mind MY personalises the line as self whereas the rest of the poem refers to plural with words like WE, US and OUR.
The descriptions you use to describe poetry are magical. This is one of the best poems I've read in a long time. In fact I wish I had written it.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thanks again. I did make that change. Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from mumsyone
This is a very meaningful piece, Debbie, and I enjoyed reading it. My only suggestion would be to make the poem font the same color as the prose.
Hugs,
Lois
which(,) when cultivated, blossoms
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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This is a very meaningful piece, Debbie, and I enjoyed reading it. My only suggestion would be to make the poem font the same color as the prose.
Hugs,
Lois
which(,) when cultivated, blossoms
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from patcelaw
Debbie, I am in awe of the beauty of this work. It is smooth in the flow of the words, the poem is strikingly profound in the meaning. I so wish I still had a six. Our words can weave a cloth of healing for us not only as we write, but as we read works like this. Blessings Patricia
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Debbie, I am in awe of the beauty of this work. It is smooth in the flow of the words, the poem is strikingly profound in the meaning. I so wish I still had a six. Our words can weave a cloth of healing for us not only as we write, but as we read works like this. Blessings Patricia
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
