With Wonder of Woven Words
Short essay on the meaning of writing View on Classic FS23 total reviews
Comment from JW
Many ... no ... I would rather believe most do not understand, nor appreciate the power of words.
They can do so much good, or on the other hand, so much harm.
Yet, many are used so carelessly.
Thanks for sharing this, Debbie. JW
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Many ... no ... I would rather believe most do not understand, nor appreciate the power of words.
They can do so much good, or on the other hand, so much harm.
Yet, many are used so carelessly.
Thanks for sharing this, Debbie. JW
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
Debbie, I enjoyed both your essay and poem. I think they are an excellent beginning for your Anthology. You write beautifully in both prose and poetry. When will the Anthology be available and where? Thanks for sharing this. You have made my day. Bob
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Debbie, I enjoyed both your essay and poem. I think they are an excellent beginning for your Anthology. You write beautifully in both prose and poetry. When will the Anthology be available and where? Thanks for sharing this. You have made my day. Bob
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Bob, if you PM me with your address, I have a copy for you. Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from krys123
Debbie; I enjoyed reading your emblematic and annotated essay and commentary that reflected your points of view clearly I really enjoyed and understood all that you have written and how all that you feel. I was impressed by each of your aspects and verses in your poem of which what is poetry. All of them along with each of them reflect, what I believe, the necessity for understanding what poetry is. The best one I read was that it also can be and melodic and orchestrated way of expressing one's feelings. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Debbie; I enjoyed reading your emblematic and annotated essay and commentary that reflected your points of view clearly I really enjoyed and understood all that you have written and how all that you feel. I was impressed by each of your aspects and verses in your poem of which what is poetry. All of them along with each of them reflect, what I believe, the necessity for understanding what poetry is. The best one I read was that it also can be and melodic and orchestrated way of expressing one's feelings. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from kiwijenny
Poetry is love and connection
as we exchange with others
thoughts shared nowhere else
Poetry keeps us centered
as we soul-search
seeking authenticity
I love your poem and prose weaving words for a better world
God bless I loved it
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Poetry is love and connection
as we exchange with others
thoughts shared nowhere else
Poetry keeps us centered
as we soul-search
seeking authenticity
I love your poem and prose weaving words for a better world
God bless I loved it
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Deborah Marie
Well penned with lovely accompanying artwork. Nice essay combined with poetry.
Very, very creative. Poetry is... a refreshing way to start each stanza of your poem.
Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming; you write beautifully, Deb
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Well penned with lovely accompanying artwork. Nice essay combined with poetry.
Very, very creative. Poetry is... a refreshing way to start each stanza of your poem.
Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming; you write beautifully, Deb
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debbie - this is pure beauty and wisdom. Words like you have penned do indeed remind us of their power....this was just lovely to read and reflect over.
A wonderful work of woven words.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Dear Debbie - this is pure beauty and wisdom. Words like you have penned do indeed remind us of their power....this was just lovely to read and reflect over.
A wonderful work of woven words.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Debbie..Even your intro is so effective because of your WORDS:
"With the wonder of woven words, we have the possibility of sharing thoughts, images, emotions, and to work toward societal change. By exchanging our writings, we give to others small pieces of ourselves while gaining small pieces of theirs which leads to the development of many loving and nurturing relationships.
Great poem to go with it and prove your point, too:
"Poetry is love and connection
as we exchange with others
thoughts shared nowhere else.
Bravo, my friend. wish I had a six left for you. Bob
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Hi, Debbie..Even your intro is so effective because of your WORDS:
"With the wonder of woven words, we have the possibility of sharing thoughts, images, emotions, and to work toward societal change. By exchanging our writings, we give to others small pieces of ourselves while gaining small pieces of theirs which leads to the development of many loving and nurturing relationships.
Great poem to go with it and prove your point, too:
"Poetry is love and connection
as we exchange with others
thoughts shared nowhere else.
Bravo, my friend. wish I had a six left for you. Bob
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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I love virtual sixes just as much as the real ones. Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Bravo! Just beautiful. Sounds like a wonderful anthology. I didn't know you did this. What a terrific way to spread the message that handicapped people are people first. :)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Bravo! Just beautiful. Sounds like a wonderful anthology. I didn't know you did this. What a terrific way to spread the message that handicapped people are people first. :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Yes, this is a night I look forward to all year. Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from adewpearl
I like your use of alliteration in the opening prose section.
a very thoughtful discussion of the positive impact writing can have on societal attitudes
excellent alliteration in your poem
excellent use of enjambment
vivid detail, insightful and inspiring observations
effective use of listing in your upbeat closing
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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I like your use of alliteration in the opening prose section.
a very thoughtful discussion of the positive impact writing can have on societal attitudes
excellent alliteration in your poem
excellent use of enjambment
vivid detail, insightful and inspiring observations
effective use of listing in your upbeat closing
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
Comment from Dawny53
Hi Debbie.. wish I had a six to give you for this well thought work.. to me, what you have created here is in essence all we are, all we hope to be.. such a beautiful poem, I love the three line stanzas, they really are powerful and beautiful.. very nice work and I'm so glad I stopped to read.. this has been one of the highlights of my entire day!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Hi Debbie.. wish I had a six to give you for this well thought work.. to me, what you have created here is in essence all we are, all we hope to be.. such a beautiful poem, I love the three line stanzas, they really are powerful and beautiful.. very nice work and I'm so glad I stopped to read.. this has been one of the highlights of my entire day!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thank you so very much, my friend. Have a blessed day~Debbie
