The Wonder
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Comment from Ricky1024
"The din of the orchestra is defining...
"The melody re coning!' "
"And as the music fades away...
"All the Angels look your way!"
Great as usual!
Close to my style...
Falls little shot.
Experience and age!!!
Dad...
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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"The din of the orchestra is defining...
"The melody re coning!' "
"And as the music fades away...
"All the Angels look your way!"
Great as usual!
Close to my style...
Falls little shot.
Experience and age!!!
Dad...
Comment Written 26-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Whats up Pops...-smile- ...well I'm trying...i'll get there one day with the love of Gods guidance...and patience that surpasses understanding that justice comes to those deserving...-smile- love Michael
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your appealing to our senses of sight, sound and taste plus the drama of the counting down. The literal "mix of gospel and hymn" is quite effective. More cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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I admired your appealing to our senses of sight, sound and taste plus the drama of the counting down. The literal "mix of gospel and hymn" is quite effective. More cheers- Joan
Comment Written 26-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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yea I clean up okay...Hey J....-smile-...Drama...? Jesus...I should be up for best director this year shouldn't I...?...I live in the kimgdom of queens...-wink-...lol ahh lol my god sometimes I make myself laugh....lol alright, enough fun for one night its best to save some for tomorrow. Boy...wonder what my life would've been like if I had parents or someone who loved me as smart as me...ahh forget it...lol love-
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Yes, sweet dreams and do save some fun for tomorrow! Big hugs- Joan
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Michael - lovely thoughts in this one. Musical prayers, Van Morrison what more could one need. Great word play and strong images that remind me of his songs.
Great overall job with this beauty, unique crafting to you alone.
Nicely done.
Thanks for sharing
Mo
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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Dear Michael - lovely thoughts in this one. Musical prayers, Van Morrison what more could one need. Great word play and strong images that remind me of his songs.
Great overall job with this beauty, unique crafting to you alone.
Nicely done.
Thanks for sharing
Mo
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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-smile-...you again..hm...-smile-....Hi...-smile-..right...you like Van...? ya know its funny...I never really listened to him, until I found him here...ya know...looking at video's...ah...sorry where were we...-smile-...me alone...-smile-...I know you like me Mo....-smile- now all we got to do is bug that bigger love...Hi-...-smile-
Comment from amada
My favorite thought: "helium balloon hurt for lift offs rapture/10-9-8-counts down 7-6-5-sounds.../like homes a special place." Excellent lines in this gospel inspired theme. Sort of metaphorical in its very special way. Lovely and inspiring.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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My favorite thought: "helium balloon hurt for lift offs rapture/10-9-8-counts down 7-6-5-sounds.../like homes a special place." Excellent lines in this gospel inspired theme. Sort of metaphorical in its very special way. Lovely and inspiring.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Hi Nancy...-smile- how are you this evening...ahh just entertaining myself...it saved me once you know...sinking, if some people only knew...-smile- Hope your healthy...love Michael
Comment from livelylinda
Hi Michael: yes, musical prayers say it best; love that line. I usually don't know if you are really saying what you are saying. However, there is a picture of hands reaching Heavenly, chalice of wine, gospel and hymn, spiritual fruit, rapture - all words connected with church/God/Jesus/righteousness, etc. So, I read a little about the spiritual Michael today. God bless you. Linda
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Hi Michael: yes, musical prayers say it best; love that line. I usually don't know if you are really saying what you are saying. However, there is a picture of hands reaching Heavenly, chalice of wine, gospel and hymn, spiritual fruit, rapture - all words connected with church/God/Jesus/righteousness, etc. So, I read a little about the spiritual Michael today. God bless you. Linda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Hey Thunder....-smile- how are you Dear Lady....Linda says you're feeling much better lately...-smile-...I thank God. ahh this was really me....watching that specific video...and this man Van....command attention. Um...I think perhaps it takes a lil' Van in every mans stand...um...no big thought,...on purpose or anything...just writing what I feel in that percise moment.....love Michael
Comment from EdMiles67
Your poem sets the scene very well with your use of words and artistic approach which I think suits the Van Morrison Jazz thing very well. Forgive me if I'm mistaken but sort of in a Beat poet way?
It also reads and flows beautifully. Very well done!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Your poem sets the scene very well with your use of words and artistic approach which I think suits the Van Morrison Jazz thing very well. Forgive me if I'm mistaken but sort of in a Beat poet way?
It also reads and flows beautifully. Very well done!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Hey Ed...-smile- thank you man...very happy you enjoyed it...love bug-
Comment from Curly Girly
To me this poem sounds like random thoughts which were written down at an evangelical meeting. It's all a bit vague and unclear. Hard to pin-point exactly what the message really is about.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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To me this poem sounds like random thoughts which were written down at an evangelical meeting. It's all a bit vague and unclear. Hard to pin-point exactly what the message really is about.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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yes maam...I went to Louisiana to a Baptist Bible convention one year...I know exactly what you mean, the message doesn't add up to the marksmenship. It is quite confusing and time consuming...actually this is about the poetic genius of Van Morrison...and of course myself...trying to rock your gypsy soul...-wink- bug the big love-
Comment from l.raven
Hey you, love this one...favorite lines...10-9-8 count down 7-6-5 sounds like homes a special place....Amen...musical prayer worships best...I love every word...and I love Van Morrison songs...and this song rocks...words uniquely yours Michael...so very well written...love you Linda xxxooo
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Hey you, love this one...favorite lines...10-9-8 count down 7-6-5 sounds like homes a special place....Amen...musical prayer worships best...I love every word...and I love Van Morrison songs...and this song rocks...words uniquely yours Michael...so very well written...love you Linda xxxooo
Comment Written 24-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Hi Linda lew hope your coochies still in the coo and the rest of you is woo hoo....-smile- thank you Darling for the review...bug love-
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thank you...goodnight....tomorrow...love
Comment from Dawny53
I never ever listen to any videos that I've seen on this site.. but I saw Van Morrison and there was no way I was going to miss that! Thanks for providing this music.. very, very kind of you! I did enjoy your poem as well, please don't get me wrong here.. the fact that you mention him in your piece.. I admire his music so much! Birds sing highest in flight.. well said!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015
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I never ever listen to any videos that I've seen on this site.. but I saw Van Morrison and there was no way I was going to miss that! Thanks for providing this music.. very, very kind of you! I did enjoy your poem as well, please don't get me wrong here.. the fact that you mention him in your piece.. I admire his music so much! Birds sing highest in flight.. well said!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015
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Wow...well let me lift the shade...isn't that better...-smile- ...look are you American...? if so you must read and listen ...with your over your heart....my Pultizer nominee......but you have to listen to the music, its quite the experience...really...you should check...or be un American, its as simple as that...-headshake-...yep..alright, see ya around the flag...bugging the bigger love-
