Comment from Xylok

Exceptional

lovely poem, lovely sentiments, lovely imagery, lovely feeling...this poem is simply lovely!

faith's corsage

golden sun

your inner spirits sky

soul songbird's serenade

joy's rainbows

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awesome, creative stuff. well put. reading this is like being in a perpetual state of BLASTING OFF!!!! toward the heavens.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015

Thank you....glad you enjoyed...we'll always be cloud, moon and sun watchers....away and away...
Love and best wishes, Ronni

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

Ronni,

hello friend. Hope all is well with you.

This poem is absolutely beautiful. Your total implication would seem to be that the beauty of life, its appreciation and faith recognition is a distinctively human value that deserves it place in a full life , recognizing, employing, and savoring its worth in all facets.

In this work the tone is exceptional. In the first place , the fact that the speaker in the poem revels in philosophy and spirituality, immediately establishes as a human being with mord sensitivity and feeling for the beauty and value of life in all its facets than most. In the last two lines because of its climactic position concludes its recognition of a higher power.

Love this work.. Jimi

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015

Thank you dear Jimi....sorry for my belated reply...unexpected eye surgery limited things quite suddenly.
Your compliments and comments here as always, most profoundly expressed, and I truly admire
the depth and scope of your insights and expressing them so astoundingly.
Love always, Ronni

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

This is so beautiful and so very sweet to think about, Ronni. I enjoyed reading it very much. I especially enjoyed these lines:
"but when you add
faith's corsage to your hearts sunsets"
and:
"soul songbird's serenade
you every step of the way"
for the beautiful creativity and unique expression that only you can do so well. This is such a musical treat, and spiritually moving too. I loved it.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

Thank you dear Merri , so glad you enjoyed, and shared such lovely and complimentary thoughts and comments!
Always a treat to have you peek in. Love, Ronni

Comment from mountainwriter49

Excellent

Good Afternoon, Ronni,

I enjoyed your free-verse poem of faith. It's filled with wonderful natural imagery which helps set the tone for the faithfulness as the poem resolves in its latter lines. I love watching clouds and how they morph, creating images and therefore things about which to ponder.

I found three minor SPAGS for you to consider:

faith[']s corsage
songbirds['] serenade
joy[']s rainbows

A great read!
Ray

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Hello Ray,
Thank you for your affirmative and supportive thoughts and comments on this poem. That you enjoyed
and appreciated the message and imagery is especially gratifying. And I note you are a cloud watcher
too, how neat! They do indeed hold endless inspirations for the poetic muse and wonders.
thanks too...;for the note on few words needing correction...will fix.
Thanks too for being such a great friend and pleasured visits.
Best wishes always, Ronni

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dearest Ronni - the energy of this poem is so wonderful, loved your descriptive word choices and the way this one just seems like a beautiful waterfall when I read it aloud. Made me feel lighter just reading it.
Wonderful work my dear one.
Thanks for sharing,
Love
Maureen
xx

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015

Thank you dear Moreen, when you find one of mine uplifting, after reading, inspired, and uplifted
by so many of yours dear friend, that indeed is a 'compliment' and sincerely appreciated! Lovely
to have your visit too dear!
Note: Sorry for tardy reply and behind on your writes, had hand surgery recently, and not yet
quite so adept at keying with one hand...LOL...it's mending ok...just slower catching up.
Love and blessings always, Ronni xxxxxxoooo

reply by Maureen's Pen on 25-Feb-2015

Take your time healing dear one.....be well.
Love & hugs

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

I like the context of the inner spirit. I don't think this is one of your best writes, but I saw through, and the portrayal of colours and vibrancy , along with the spiritual element delivered the theme.

I like when you romance the stone with your poetry...therein lies your strength.
Still, a satisfactory write.
Best wishes, Ronni.
RG

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015

Thank you RG, for your candid and conscientious thoughts and comments, which are always sincerely
appreciated and heartily grateful for. Will indeed do some re editing on this one. I appreciate your
objectivity in your rating on this, and you always provide both pro and con views to take note of
and I gratefully do. Thanks again. Best wishes always, Ronni

Comment from crzypnter

Excellent

Hi Ronni,
Another wonderful poem you have written. The art work is memorizing.Inspiration can come in many forms,and yes even clouds. I really love the part of the soul song birds serenade. From clouds to rainbows to the happiness we find within our selves is truly a blessing.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2015

Well Hi August!
What a wonderful surprise for you to peek into my little corner! So glad you like this poem, and
yes we always have the spirit and inclination to reach deeper into our inner selves and celebrate
the wonderful inspirations we can cue in on. Great to have you share your kind thoughts..
Hope all is going well for you now. A bit more rested up and more calmed now? Hope so.

Thanks again, gratefully with warmest wishes always, Ronni

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Stranger. Long time since we have crossed paths, eh? How are you these days. You mare still one of my favorite poets on the site, but until recently I was away for so long, you know?

I love tese lines in particular, Ronni:

"in gentle flowers smile
sunshine light your day
soul song birds serenade
you every step of the way>"

Take care and Bless you always. Bob

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015

Well thank you too my friend Bob! Has been awhile indeed, but always so great when you
peek in! Appreciate your great comments and noting your favorite lines. I believe you
have one of your books published recently? If so, congratulations! Well deserved....
love to hear more about it if you have a minute sometime....Thanks again for
the visit and sharing. I hope all is going well for you, and wonderful you are back now!
Love and blessings, Ronni

reply by Mastery on 22-Feb-2015

Hi, Ronni. Yes, I have success at last with finding an agent/publisher. My novel "fatal Beauty" will be released this Thursday, February 26th and will be available in most book stores, they tell me. It is not self-published and I am glad I held out to get it done by a puiblisher.

It's called "Fatal Beauty" and I premiered it here on Fanstory early last year. I found the publisher last summer and now it will be out there. I am so elated and otherwise blown away.

I am posting the second in the detective series called Triple-Crossed" on Fanstory right now. I had to disable Fatal Beauty on here though for obvious reasons. I hope you get to peek at it before the violence starts. LOL...It seems to me, I remember you don't care for violence. Take care and Bless you. Love, /Bob

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

This poem is a blessing. What a wonderful thing to read on my Sunday. I love your simple rhymes and spiritual message. I delighted reading this. Thank you for sharing it. God Bless.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015

Thank you for enjoying and appreciating this poem. Always so gratifying to hear it was especially
timely for a Sunday read. My pleasure to share, and thanks again for the kind visit and sharing.
Best wishes always, Ronni

Comment from Travis64

Excellent

I did like this and the images but I have suggestions that possibly could make this read and present itself to your reader better:

How about:
Cottony covered clouds come floating by

Adding color to your sun-setting heart's glow
to your spirited sky

If once a day
heavenly portals
silently, gratefully
beckon you inside
you will delight often

In a gentle flower's smile
sweet sunshine lighting your way
serenading soulful song birds
melodious moments every step of the way
joyful rainbows lingering within
gracious, yet ever true
cheerfulness abides within
Divine blessings
your whole life through

Again, merely suggestions and I truly did enjoy this!
Blessings,

~Travis64

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2015

Hi Travis,
Thank you for your candid comments and your most astute suggestions, I always welcome
such kindly, constructive suggestions, and indeed shall see how it works out with your suggestions.
Thanks again, and have a great day!