Love Test
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Comment from Rikki66
Mine is only forty-six years of bliss the actions are the same. Recently I bought her a new pressure cooker she wanted, a cat she wanted and a new couch she wanted and each one was her early Valentine gift. On Cupid's day she told everyone that she didn't get anything. So you wrote my life and not a few others I would guess. Job well done.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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Mine is only forty-six years of bliss the actions are the same. Recently I bought her a new pressure cooker she wanted, a cat she wanted and a new couch she wanted and each one was her early Valentine gift. On Cupid's day she told everyone that she didn't get anything. So you wrote my life and not a few others I would guess. Job well done.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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That's funny...it'll reach you to be early! I think you should tell this sad tale and at least get some sympathy out of the deal! Thanks for the chuckle...Dennis
Comment from patcelaw
That sounds like love to me. The woman is in love with you, but she just wants to keep you guessing, as any intelligent woman would do. You guys don't know when we keep you guessing you actually behave like decent folk. oops! I didn't mean to give away our womanly secrets, so disregard the previous sentence. Patricia. :-)
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That sounds like love to me. The woman is in love with you, but she just wants to keep you guessing, as any intelligent woman would do. You guys don't know when we keep you guessing you actually behave like decent folk. oops! I didn't mean to give away our womanly secrets, so disregard the previous sentence. Patricia. :-)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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Yeah, she's good at it but I catch her every now and then...:) Thanks for reading and commenting so knowledgeably! :)
Comment from royowen
Is this you Dennis? I don't know if I should say, she's a fortunate and blessed woman to have you, and I'm sure you will agree with me! I love the vacuuming, I actually do the vacuuming, keeps the wolf from the door. I found this hilarious, the couple in the artwork look very serious! Well scribed bro, the happy expression on the ladies is all we need to see she's happy, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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Is this you Dennis? I don't know if I should say, she's a fortunate and blessed woman to have you, and I'm sure you will agree with me! I love the vacuuming, I actually do the vacuuming, keeps the wolf from the door. I found this hilarious, the couple in the artwork look very serious! Well scribed bro, the happy expression on the ladies is all we need to see she's happy, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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Roy, you and I have a lot in common besides our union in Christ. If I don't vacuum, it doesn't get done. She does a lot of other things but vacuuming...not so much! I'll make a deal with you, I'll tell your wife how wonderful you are if you'll tell mine the same thing? LOL Thanks Roy...much love in Christ, Dennis
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That's sounds like a great deal to me, my brother, you live in a great part of the country, love to you and your dear wife, she's very fortunate to have a hubby like you, Dennis, bless you both from Elaine and me,YBIC. ROY
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WE are blessed here, thank you and reciprocal greetings to you both from Gaye and me. God bless you both, Dennis
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Most welcome, Dennis
Comment from katfanktaylor48
'Love Test', by Deniz22, is a warmhearted story that most of us, who have been or a married, can relate to. It's written in a simple language and the text used is appropriate for this particular story.
The husband, is the protagonist, because he is narrating the story, and its in the first person.This means that his wife is the antagonist, only because there are only two characters (or at least in this chapter of the story). She is the topic of the narrative, which means that we, the reader, see her from his point of view. He has effectively used conflict, crisis and resolution and taken us on a journey. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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'Love Test', by Deniz22, is a warmhearted story that most of us, who have been or a married, can relate to. It's written in a simple language and the text used is appropriate for this particular story.
The husband, is the protagonist, because he is narrating the story, and its in the first person.This means that his wife is the antagonist, only because there are only two characters (or at least in this chapter of the story). She is the topic of the narrative, which means that we, the reader, see her from his point of view. He has effectively used conflict, crisis and resolution and taken us on a journey. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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Never got a review quite like this....but appreciate it all the same. Thanks for taking time to read and comment so thoroughly. :)
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Sorry. I'm a third year student of the Bachelor of Creative Arts, Creative Writing at MIT (in New Zealand) so all the theory etc is still quite fresh in my mind. I'm writing a Children's Poetry book as my capstone project this year and am aware I need to apply these things. I hope you enjoyed by review even though it was a little different to your usual reviews.
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A cut above the others for sure and yes I did enjoy and appreciate it. Hope your book goes well... Dennis
Comment from juliesibs
I love this. And oh my gosh, I so relate to the toenail in my hair. Your wife is probably a saint.
I was blessed to marry my best friend and laughter is a huge part of our life, on top of that, when we are stuck together, I'm on the hunt for an arms dealer to shoot him with a Bazooka.
Great job.
Julie
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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I love this. And oh my gosh, I so relate to the toenail in my hair. Your wife is probably a saint.
I was blessed to marry my best friend and laughter is a huge part of our life, on top of that, when we are stuck together, I'm on the hunt for an arms dealer to shoot him with a Bazooka.
Great job.
Julie
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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A Bazooka? Please don't share that info with my wife...:) Thank you so much for reading and commenting....my wife is pretty wonderful...it's taken me far too long to truly appreciate her. :)
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You got it, that will be our secret.
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:)
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You got it, that will be our secret.
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Comment from Dawny53
I really enjoyed this story! Your sense of humor kept me on my feet throughout the entire story.. loved all the little details you added.. the toenails was great.. and taking one out of her hair undetected.. funny! Certainly deserving of a six star rating.. thanks!
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I really enjoyed this story! Your sense of humor kept me on my feet throughout the entire story.. loved all the little details you added.. the toenails was great.. and taking one out of her hair undetected.. funny! Certainly deserving of a six star rating.. thanks!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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Thank you, Dawny. So glad you liked it. I appreciate your reading and reviewing so kindly, Dennis
Comment from Pyrrho
"A lot of this is true. She's a wonderful woman." ... now that makes me wonder what part is not true and why it is in there. But i assess this one as excellent anyway.
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"A lot of this is true. She's a wonderful woman." ... now that makes me wonder what part is not true and why it is in there. But i assess this one as excellent anyway.
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
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A trifle embellished...nothing major. Thanks for reading and your comments.
