To Cherish Thorns
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Comment from dmt1967
I like the format this poem was written in. The shape it made on the paper and the way it faded away. I liked the white on black as well. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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I like the format this poem was written in. The shape it made on the paper and the way it faded away. I liked the white on black as well. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2015
Comment from Curly Girly
To me, this reads like a good poem. You have presented the format in a creative way too, but personally, I cannot stand a lack of punctuation. It would read better with it.
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
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To me, this reads like a good poem. You have presented the format in a creative way too, but personally, I cannot stand a lack of punctuation. It would read better with it.
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
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Thank you. Yes, I couldn't agree more. It's one of the many rules, no punctuation. It also bans capitals, so other than word placement etc. there's no good way to assist the flow. Glad you managed to enjoy it in spite of that. Much appreciated. :) mikey
