The Wonder
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I missed you, Michael. This is such a beautiful, beautiful poem, my friend, one that Nancy is bound to adore. I think it is one of your very best. It is brimming with your love for this very special lady, it was there in your line:
I saw you in the shades of Autumn, that was beautiful. Lots of love, my friend, Sandy xsx
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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I missed you, Michael. This is such a beautiful, beautiful poem, my friend, one that Nancy is bound to adore. I think it is one of your very best. It is brimming with your love for this very special lady, it was there in your line:
I saw you in the shades of Autumn, that was beautiful. Lots of love, my friend, Sandy xsx
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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She told me a story...this song was playing the first time she was asked to dance. the gentleman who asked her...became her first love. so I was really...in her head....though I do adore her from a far...and envy that gentleman...-smile- Hey you...ahh having a fit with that "new" site.....I cant center my words...or present them ...the way I would.......they've completely gotten rid of "alternate edit"...so...I'm not having as much fun. Bug the big love...-wink-
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You are not the only one, there has been loads of complaints, but Tom isn't going to change it back, I think it will gradually all be just the new site. Horrible, isn't it.
I can centre mine, go to the very bottom after you have your words in, the other buttons are there for centering and colours etc. Where did you disappear too, you were gone for days, I was going to e-mail you over the weekend if you hadn't come on by then. I was getting worried. :( xxx
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ah...I think I have bi-polor disorder now...-headshake-...just cant seem to catch a break Sandy....one thing after another....been hanging out with my Forum family...fighting with one or two...but we drink...-wink-...lol ahh just messing...love-
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I'm just kidding Sandy...relax...lol
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That's all right then! But you take care...PLEASE! I worry about you. Love you always, my special friend. :) xx
Comment from daycee1
Oh my goodness, that was inspiring, it made me cry, I am even still crying as I write this. I loved your story, it was romantic, sweet, and inspired me!
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Oh my goodness, that was inspiring, it made me cry, I am even still crying as I write this. I loved your story, it was romantic, sweet, and inspired me!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Hi Daycee...-smile- ahh but its not mine....well, I suppose its all of ours in some time to come or gone by...-smile-...but ...its really about a first dance...ah...first time of truly feeling beautiful. thank you maam...bug the big love...-wink-
Comment from Joan E.
Welcome back stranger--just in time for Valentine's Day! You certainly picked up where you left off. I admired your poem coming full circle with vivid imagery. My favorite one is "music/just born fresh torn from heaven". Your artwork selection reinforces the image of her. Hugs and happy weekend- Joan
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Welcome back stranger--just in time for Valentine's Day! You certainly picked up where you left off. I admired your poem coming full circle with vivid imagery. My favorite one is "music/just born fresh torn from heaven". Your artwork selection reinforces the image of her. Hugs and happy weekend- Joan
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
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Hello Mamewasell....poly a voo to you...have been missed. Yes yes Valentines day Cupids holiday...wouldn't think of missing it...I love to watch all the happy exchange chocolate kisses....I weep for a while and wake up and feel better...than the day before...-wink-...Alright J...save me a piece of carmal...Bug the big love-
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Lots of virtual Hershey's kisses are coming your way! Trade sweets for the weeps. My husband volunteered to make dinner Saturday, and I tactfully suggested we go out to dinner instead. He's no chef and I did not look forward to cleaning up after him! lol -Joan
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lol...wow...you see how it pays off to marry a smart woman...Bob so dam lucky...-kick-a-can-...Bug the big love!
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Thanks for the compliment--I'll have to remind him of his good luck--he may have forgotten after 44 years! -J
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put on your tennis outfit...you'll be sure again...-wink-
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Oooh--great idea--we haven't played tennis together in eons. (He plays with a former colleague every Friday.) Hope you have time off from work for good behavior and can enjoy the three-day weekend- J
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O yea....I'm afraid do. its been very slow....the rabbit past me by eons ago...so how did that story end in your school...? haha...have you guys...big love-
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All's well--remember, slow and steady wins the race! Night, night--off to the Land of Nod- Joan
Comment from l.raven
Oh Michael, this is truly one of your best....I am taken by your every word...from the moment they met...and then the dance...spin me in your rapture...see my beautiful once more...so romantic...words as only can write...I know Nancy(Amada) will love this...your picture and your colors are stunning...very beautifully write sweetie...Love Linda xxoo
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Oh Michael, this is truly one of your best....I am taken by your every word...from the moment they met...and then the dance...spin me in your rapture...see my beautiful once more...so romantic...words as only can write...I know Nancy(Amada) will love this...your picture and your colors are stunning...very beautifully write sweetie...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
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Hi Linda...well its gonna be my last...unless "they" fix that flipping thing....it took me almost a year to learn how to do "my thing"...on "alternate editor".....now look at this shit.....very upset....thank you Dear...love Michael
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It came out beautiful Michael...I know a lot have complain...but in time you will master it...it throw me as well...just work with it...your colors are perfect...you are so welcome...love back...Linda
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I have spent more time...trying to center my words then I did thinking of them...and have literally given up trying to color ...anything. it sucks Linda...plane and simple..Bug-
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calm down...I know Michaelchall had problems too!!! see if he can help you...everyone has had them...just work on it...love
Comment from Jay Squires
The last of the diehard Romantics, Michael. I enjoyed the Spiritual-Romantic tension in the first two stanzas.
If God ever looked at you as she did you would be worshiping Him in a monastery.
But He didn't an so the Romantic swing between She does and She doesn't.
The stuff good poetry is made of. And this is one.
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The last of the diehard Romantics, Michael. I enjoyed the Spiritual-Romantic tension in the first two stanzas.
If God ever looked at you as she did you would be worshiping Him in a monastery.
But He didn't an so the Romantic swing between She does and She doesn't.
The stuff good poetry is made of. And this is one.
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
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thank you Jay...appreciate you stopping by sir....bug the big love....-smile-
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Michael - I do believe you have outdone yourself. This has some unique lines and imagery I wasn't expecting. Yet it pulls and holds the reader in the web of your thoughts and sight...Lovely poem.
Thanks for sharing,
Moe
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Dear Michael - I do believe you have outdone yourself. This has some unique lines and imagery I wasn't expecting. Yet it pulls and holds the reader in the web of your thoughts and sight...Lovely poem.
Thanks for sharing,
Moe
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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WOOOOO WOOOOooo....how happy am I Mo....? huh...c'mere....uh hu...c'mere sweetheart...WOOoooooooo WOOoooooooo MO LOVES ME!!!
