The Wonder
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "I see You"miscellaneous poems
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Comment from Jackarrie
A beautiful poem and a beautiful song. I have a friend who sings this When we go to Karaoke in Spain.
Your poem is Well written, the space between the poem and the song if too long.
Mary
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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A beautiful poem and a beautiful song. I have a friend who sings this When we go to Karaoke in Spain.
Your poem is Well written, the space between the poem and the song if too long.
Mary
Comment Written 14-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Hi Mary....-smile- ...yes I can see why woman swooned at his sound...this Lucio Gatica's got it...-wink-....haha ...yes yes yes I'm aware the presentation sucks...blame it on the boss. Bug the big love....Michael
Comment from c_lucas
No one knows when cupid arrow will strike them. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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No one knows when cupid arrow will strike them. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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no one but Cupid...the kids got the bow...-wink- thank you Charlie...you the man...bug the big love Michael
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You're welcome, Michael. Charrlie
Comment from emrpoems
The song is one of my favorites and the poem matches it romantic feel
A uniquely heart felt and emotional piece
Sorry I do not have any sixes
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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The song is one of my favorites and the poem matches it romantic feel
A uniquely heart felt and emotional piece
Sorry I do not have any sixes
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Really...its the first I'd heard it...chose it special for someone......yes, I like it....love it now that I know it means so much I care for...-smile- alright you...Bug the big love...michael
Comment from kiwijenny
were...universe all
everything this lifetime makes important
and your smile saiI'd you noticed me
Exquisite imagery ...beautiful
God bless
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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were...universe all
everything this lifetime makes important
and your smile saiI'd you noticed me
Exquisite imagery ...beautiful
God bless
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Hi Jenny...-smile- ahh thank you so much....I'm very pleased you enjoyed it...Bug the big love...Michael
Comment from Dawn Munro
Michael, I don't think I have ever read another poem of yours I loved as much as this one - this is magnificent, my friend, simply masterful use of romantic language. I don't have a six, dammit! Ran out of them on Monday! But this is ho-so-worthy!!!
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Michael, I don't think I have ever read another poem of yours I loved as much as this one - this is magnificent, my friend, simply masterful use of romantic language. I don't have a six, dammit! Ran out of them on Monday! But this is ho-so-worthy!!!
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Hi Dawn....-smile-...hm...why thank you...I wrote it in one sitting....I think I always do. Been a while so wasn't sure....thank you Dear...Bug the big love...Michael
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It's lovely. (*smile*) Good for you. Beautiful artwork you chose too.
Comment from dmt1967
I like the recording, but I am a romantic at heart. I like the structure and format of the poem and I like the way the poem is written from the heart. This is a great poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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I like the recording, but I am a romantic at heart. I like the structure and format of the poem and I like the way the poem is written from the heart. This is a great poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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why thank you Maam...-smile- very pleased you enjoyed it...Bug the big love...Michael
Comment from livelylinda
Michael: such romance in your poem and music . . . now I know what you were doing during your absence here . . . you dog you! But, beautiful writing and I leave you with a smile on my face. Thunder Linda
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Michael: such romance in your poem and music . . . now I know what you were doing during your absence here . . . you dog you! But, beautiful writing and I leave you with a smile on my face. Thunder Linda
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Hi Thunder...-smile- how are you...?...No no...truly I have been ...trying to reclaim me...I guess, its been very difficult. Nancy ...Amada....told me of her first dance to this song....the boy asked her to go steady afterward....smart fella...-smile-...so I just was her recapturing the memory....Bug the big love Lady....Michael
Comment from alf collier
Hi reconciled. this is a truly heart-warming piece of poetic loving. The words flow and the emotion pours through the lines, alf
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Hi reconciled. this is a truly heart-warming piece of poetic loving. The words flow and the emotion pours through the lines, alf
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Why thank you Maam....-smile- much appreciated...have a wonderful evening. Bug the big love...Michael
Comment from PatVallesMangan
This lovely free verse is extremely well done. The powerful descriptive language captures the reader from the start. It seems to become the beautiful music you describe and then the dance began.
" ...fresh torn from heaven was its taste eternal ..." is such an amazing line and this poem is filled with so many.
The picture adds to the innocence of this haunting love.
I truly enjoyed reading this. Blessings! Pat :)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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This lovely free verse is extremely well done. The powerful descriptive language captures the reader from the start. It seems to become the beautiful music you describe and then the dance began.
" ...fresh torn from heaven was its taste eternal ..." is such an amazing line and this poem is filled with so many.
The picture adds to the innocence of this haunting love.
I truly enjoyed reading this. Blessings! Pat :)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Wow...-smile- why thank you...I was wondering if I had lost it....thank you very much...Bug the big love!
Comment from ravenblack
Alms for poor eyesight- love that line. There is certain beauty that once seen, is a revelation to the eyes, a filling of the cup that will no longer permit vision to be poor. My Spanish is rusty, but you might want to check. I think besesme should be besame. Excellent poem.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Alms for poor eyesight- love that line. There is certain beauty that once seen, is a revelation to the eyes, a filling of the cup that will no longer permit vision to be poor. My Spanish is rusty, but you might want to check. I think besesme should be besame. Excellent poem.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Hey Ed....-smile- ah thanks man....you're right I fixed it...appreciate you Bro...Bug the big love-
