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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A CHARMing image choice . Lol. Sorry!
Your grandson certainly has turned the tables.
The Brevette style is a style I have only recently tried. The subject choice, image and thoughtful wording combine perfectly.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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A CHARMing image choice . Lol. Sorry!
Your grandson certainly has turned the tables.
The Brevette style is a style I have only recently tried. The subject choice, image and thoughtful wording combine perfectly.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 14-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Thank you Shirley.
Comment from Joan E.
I am glad you posted this Brevette, even though you did not enter the contest. It seems like it takes a special set of circumstances to create this form and do it justice. Well done! Kudos to your grandson for capturing the python literally, and to you for catching the moment on film and paper. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
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I am glad you posted this Brevette, even though you did not enter the contest. It seems like it takes a special set of circumstances to create this form and do it justice. Well done! Kudos to your grandson for capturing the python literally, and to you for catching the moment on film and paper. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
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Thank you Joan. It was an interesting day.
Comment from Capricorn30
I enjoyed the Brevette poem--it was fun, and penning shorter formats seems to come much easier for me;
Oh my, Tom--your grandson seems to have become well acquainted with his reptilian friend!
"Snake"
"C h a r m e d";
A term made to not only the king cobras, but other snakes as well;
Your grandson looks quite happy--I can't say I would be as pleased!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I enjoyed the Brevette poem--it was fun, and penning shorter formats seems to come much easier for me;
Oh my, Tom--your grandson seems to have become well acquainted with his reptilian friend!
"Snake"
"C h a r m e d";
A term made to not only the king cobras, but other snakes as well;
Your grandson looks quite happy--I can't say I would be as pleased!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thank you Margaret. Yes, he loved it.
Comment from rod007
I enjoyed this. The inherent danger in what he did is clear and the word 'charm' connotes the courage of the boy in the face of death. But then the snake was charmed by the boy so no harm would befall te child. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I enjoyed this. The inherent danger in what he did is clear and the word 'charm' connotes the courage of the boy in the face of death. But then the snake was charmed by the boy so no harm would befall te child. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thank you rod.
Comment from lakeport
Python, indeed that's a brave young boy with this big snake around his neck.
the three words say is all. Good luck at the contest. God bless you. Lakeport.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Python, indeed that's a brave young boy with this big snake around his neck.
the three words say is all. Good luck at the contest. God bless you. Lakeport.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thank you Lakeport.
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you are very welcome,Lakeport.
Comment from kiwijenny
Ha ha ha ..snake charmed boy....but Ooo what if there is a sequel brevette
Snake harmed boy...or snake armed boy....where he smiles and shows eerie snake fangs or something completely different...Whoah boa boy
God bless
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Ha ha ha ..snake charmed boy....but Ooo what if there is a sequel brevette
Snake harmed boy...or snake armed boy....where he smiles and shows eerie snake fangs or something completely different...Whoah boa boy
God bless
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hah! That is a great review with a lot of imagination.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Your 3 words put together make quite a statement. They were good choices for your brevette. The brevette is kind of fun to write:)
Teresa
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Your 3 words put together make quite a statement. They were good choices for your brevette. The brevette is kind of fun to write:)
Teresa
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Thank you Teresa. Your poem got me to do one. I appreciate the inspiration. They are fun and you coukd sure write a lot of them quickly.
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yes but they do take some thought in order for the 3 words to make sense together as yours did.
