Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. This is a creative and well-written poem. It should be a great entry for the contest. The artwork makes the theme of the poem easy t understand. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017

Thank you so much for your encouraging words. Unfortunately this has been written long time ago, not a contest entry.
Love Pupa

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and good 3-5-3 you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the beautiful picture. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017

Thank you so much for your encouraging words. Unfortunately this has been written long time ago, not a contest entry.
Love Pupa

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

this is a well constructed 3-5-3 about how nature reflects love. You have created a great visual within the short lines of this poem. Well done and thank you for sharing,
~patty~

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017

Thanks for your encouraging words
Love
Pupa

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

Indeed a love story, the hands
reaching across to touch as
the beauty of a sunrise forms.
Only eight syllables but you
have told this warm romantic
tale.
Well done

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks fastdigits, I appreciate your review.
Love
Pupa

Comment from juliebookly

Excellent

This poem has a strong use of imagery given the word limit. It does justice to the beautiful picture you took over there. It's an amazing poem

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks Julie, appreciate your kind review. Sorry for this delay in replying.
Love
Pupa

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Excellent photo that complements your tiny poem very well, you took the photo yourself. The whole poem is very nice. Dot on syllable count. Best wishes for the prompt/

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks Robina and sorry for this delay in replying.
Love
Pupa

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Anon. I find it really hard to write a review on such a little piece, but from time to time one just leaps off the page and says so much, as this one does. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks Fez and sorry for this delay.
Love
Pupa

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

Nature writes a story, Love in the Air , is a very nice little poem that combines and, embrace, a sunrise and alove story. Best of luck in the contest. May God bless you!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks for your very kind words, Dr. Ned and sorry for this delay in replying.
Love
Pupa

reply by Dr. Nad on 28-Feb-2015

You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Well, if the embrace you write of happens in the wee hours of the early dawn sunrise, then chances are both parties involved have spent a night of romantic bliss with each other. So, I can easily see where the love story comes into play.

Well done, and good luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks Dean, yes I am sure they fell in love years ago as they have grown together! Sorry for replying so late.
Love
Pupa

reply by Dean Kuch on 27-Feb-2015

welcome. :)

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

You have nicely captured the mysterious yet delightful part
of the day when anew day of possibilities show compromise
as we greet that time with positivity and show love to others.
Charlene

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015