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My Life In A Box

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Comment from Dean Kuch
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And your life was forever changed for the better, is that about how the story ends? H-m-m-m-m-m-mmmmmm...

Well, it is one of God's promises after all...

Matthew 7:7 -- Ask, and it shall be given you; seek, and ye shall find; knock, and it shall be opened unto you:

Well done spiritual based poem firmly grounded in scripture.

Best of luck to you. ~Dean

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2015
    Thank you Dean. The contest is over, but I won even if I didn't win the contest. :) A hard life and real sinner here, but he always had my 6. And yes, it is ending good that way. Blessings and thank you. Barbara
reply by Dean Kuch on 08-Feb-2015
    That's as it should be, I feel, Barbara. You're more than welcome. :)
Comment from patcelaw
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I remember many times as a child looking at the things of this world and I could see God. As I would sit on the bank of the creek and pick up a wet stone from the water I would see the marvels of God, I could see the same in holding the hand of my twin, picking a flower in the meadow the racing on the field of our horse bay and so many other marvels. I guess God was wooing me unto Himself all the while and I messed up my life so badly, I almost gave up, but God was good and would not let me go and finally I came to Him and ask Him to forgive and He did, Praise God. Patricia

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
    Yes. Praise God for His gife of forgiveness. His Son. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from Charlene0513
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That is the mystery of following Jesus
we must first let Him into our hearts and when we decide to open that door that is when your faith in Him has become a lot more stronger.
Charlene

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
    This is reviewed too late, the contest closed, but thank you. I am the winner, winner in the contest or not with Christ. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from LeannaP
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I like this read.
Sort , sweet yet simple and insightful
There is this notion
of faith as an underlying
theme in this
particular piece.
I like that you chose a short prose
to explain your appreciation for
Christianity.
Well done and well
written
Cheers
LeannaP

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
    This is reviewed too late, the contest closed, but thank you for reviewing and your fine comments. I am the winner with Christ winner in the contest or not. Blessings. Barbara The style is Haiku. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That is lovely, author. You have written of how you felt when you were a young lonely child, and let Jesus come into your heart. At that innocent age, you knew, even then that Jesus would always be there for you, and always be your friend. I really liked this one. Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
    This is reviewed too late, the contest closed, but I appreciate your kind meaningful words. It is a winner for me with Christ, whether it wins or not. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from Jackarrie
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A short poem and straight to the point of faith, but We don't need to understand ,Religion, Philosophy or science to access Spirit.

good luck in the contest. Mary


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
    Thank you Mary. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi,

Great artwork to emphasize your poem of faith and spirituality.

Nicely penned and a lovely presentation.

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
    Thank you Jax. Blessings.
Comment from Doc Holiday
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Good thing you were home to open that door.
Sometimes we get so busy with our lives we fail to hear the knocking.
Well-written spiritual poem.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thank you Doc. Blessings.
Comment from TAB_that's me
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This is short, simple and sweet but a very good entry into the spiritual writing poem. I wish you well in the contest.
teresa

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thank you. It is a haiku. Blessings.
Comment from Dawny53
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I think this is a very sweet and sentimental entry! You said a lot in so very few words, and yes, this image is perfect for your poem.. good luck!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thank you. Blessings.